打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more concise and correct grammar and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct phrasing (e.g., “handwriting” not “write by hands”, and remove repeated points about time).

示例: I prefer typing because I can type much faster than I can write by hand. Also, it makes it easy to save and share my notes online, which is useful when I collaborate with classmates.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence and combine similar ideas to avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a brief specific example of when you use it.

示例: I usually type on my laptop because it’s portable and convenient. For example, I can work on assignments in the library or message friends while commuting.

建议: Organize the answer with a clear time reference, reason, and a brief result. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “I had to complete a project” and “my speed has improved”).

示例: I learned to type about two or three years ago because I had to complete a research project and collect data online. Since then I have practised regularly, so my typing speed has improved significantly.

建议: Give a clear, structured answer: state a main method, then list one or two specific practices with linking words. Avoid filler words like “uh” and correct collocations (e.g., “improve your typing speed” not “fasten your typing speed”).

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly: for instance, I type a short diary entry every night and use typing exercises or short assignments in Notepad. This regular practice helps increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I am much faster on a keyboard and I think it is quite time consuming to write by hands and also typing or makes easier to save and share my notes whereas it is less time consuming.

✓ I prefer typing because I am much faster on a keyboard, and I think it is quite time-consuming to write by hand; also typing makes it easier to save and share my notes, and it takes less time.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'write by hands' (should be 'write by hand' — fixed preposition/number and collocation), missing hyphen in 'time-consuming', extra word 'or' after 'typing', awkward clause order and repetition 'whereas it is less time consuming' corrected to 'it takes less time'. Suggestion: Use consistent present tense and common collocations (write by hand, time-consuming), remove unnecessary words, and combine clauses for clarity.

× Usually I type on my laptop because I found it quite easy and also I can use it anywhere or it is my habit.

✓ Usually I type on my laptop because I find it quite easy, and I can use it anywhere; it has also become a habit.

Errors: tense mismatch 'I found' (past) should be present 'I find' because the reason is general; incorrect conjunction 'or' used instead of appropriate connector; awkward phrasing 'it is my habit' changed to 'it has become a habit'. Suggestion: Keep present tense for habitual actions and use clear connectors (and, because) rather than 'or'.

× So I use laptop to type anything or to message anyone.

✓ So I use my laptop to type anything or to message anyone.

Error: missing article before 'laptop' — should be 'my laptop' or 'a laptop' depending on meaning. Also 'type anything or to message anyone' is acceptable but keep parallel structure: 'to type anything or message anyone' (removed extra 'to'). Suggestion: Include necessary articles and maintain parallel verb forms.

× As I remember, it was about 2-3 years ago when I learned typing on a keyboard.

✓ As I remember, it was about two or three years ago when I learned to type on a keyboard.

Errors: use of numerals in speech is acceptable but write out 'two or three' for fluency; 'learned typing' is incorrect collocation — use 'learned to type'. Suggestion: Use 'learned to + verb' for acquiring skills.

× I learned it because I have to complete a project, so I choose to collect data from Internet and save it in my laptop.

✓ I learned it because I had to complete a project, so I chose to collect data from the internet and save it on my laptop.

Errors: tense inconsistency — 'have to' present should be past 'had to' because referring to past event; 'choose' should be past 'chose'; prepositions: 'from Internet' should be 'from the internet' and 'in my laptop' should be 'on my laptop'. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistently when describing past events and use correct prepositions ('on' a device, 'the internet').

× And at that time I learned to type.

✓ And at that time I learned to type.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. Explanation: The sentence correctly uses past tense to describe a past event and uses the correct structure 'learned to type'. (Included because instruction requires replying each sentence's correction.)

× Also my speed is improved now.

✓ Also my speed has improved now.

Error: incorrect use of simple present 'is improved' (passive-like) when meaning present perfect change 'has improved'. Suggestion: Use present perfect 'has improved' to show a change from past to present.

× In my opinion, writing about your daily routine at night on keyboard will help to improve your typing and uh, making random notes or typing homework in notepad regularly will help you to improve or fasten your typing speed.

✓ In my opinion, writing about your daily routine at night on the keyboard will help improve your typing, and making random notes or typing homework in Notepad regularly will help you improve or increase your typing speed.

Errors: missing article 'the keyboard'; unnecessary 'to' after 'help' — 'help improve' preferred; inconsistent parallel structure: use gerunds consistently ('writing... and making...'); 'fasten' is incorrect collocation for speed — use 'increase' or 'improve'; capitalize 'Notepad' as a program name. Suggestion: Use consistent gerund forms, correct collocations, and appropriate articles.