打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Reduce grammar errors and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague adjectives like "perfect personal" and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "more personal" or "more natural").

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more natural and personal than typing. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain information better and can recall ideas more easily. Therefore, I usually handwrite notes for important meetings or study sessions.

建议: Combine short sentences to improve fluency and use linking words. Begin with a single clear topic sentence, then expand with specific tasks and frequency. Avoid sentence fragments like "Because I work..."

示例: Yes, I type every day on my desktop at the office because I work in marketing and communications. I regularly write emails, prepare reports, and update social media posts, so I'm on the keyboard for most of the day.

建议: Correct minor grammar and word choice errors and add a linking word for clarity. Use past tense consistently and replace awkward phrases like "tap a keyboard" with "type" or "use a keyboard."

示例: I learned to type in high school during computer lessons. I practised regularly in class, so by the time I finished school I could type quite quickly and accurately.

建议: Fix grammar and clarity issues and avoid redundant or incorrect phrases (e.g., "graduated my speed and accurately accuracy"). Provide a clear method and give a specific example of practice. Use linking words to structure the answer.

示例: I haven't had formal training, but my typing improved through daily practice at work. For example, handling many emails and reports increased my speed and accuracy, and I regularly practise keyboard shortcuts to work more efficiently.

× I prefer handwriting because it's feel more natural and perfect personal than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it feels more natural and more personal than typing.

Error: 'it's feel' mixes contraction with base verb; subject-verb agreement and word choice. 'it's' (it is) requires third-person singular verb 'feels'. 'perfect personal' is incorrect adjective collocation; use 'more personal' to compare. Suggestion: use 'it feels' and a clear comparative phrase 'more personal' to convey preference.

× When I write notes by hand, I understand and remember the material better, and the experiences seem more thoughtful and romantic.

✓ When I write notes by hand, I understand and remember the material better, and the experience seems more thoughtful and romantic.

Error: plural 'experiences' is awkward here; the singular 'experience' refers to the act of writing notes. Use consistent singular noun to match the preceding clause. Suggestion: use 'the experience' for the general feeling of handwriting.

× Yes, I type every day on my desktop at the office. Because I work in marketing and communication.

✓ Yes, I type every day on my desktop at the office because I work in marketing and communication.

Error: sentence fragment 'Because I work...' cannot stand alone. Combine with the previous sentence to form a complete sentence, joining cause and effect. Suggestion: connect clauses with 'because' or make two complete sentences (e.g., 'I work in marketing and communication.')

× I often write emails, create reports, and update social media posts so I'm on the keyboard for most of the day.

✓ I often write emails, create reports, and update social media posts, so I'm on the keyboard for most of the day.

Error: missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'so' when joining two independent clauses. Adding the comma improves readability and grammar. Suggestion: insert a comma before 'so' in this context.

× I learned to tap a keyboard when I was at high school during computer lesson.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at high school during computer lessons.

Errors: 'tap a keyboard' is unnatural; 'learned to type' is standard. Use 'on a keyboard' not 'a keyboard' alone, and 'in high school' is more common than 'at high school'. 'computer lesson' should be plural or 'a computer lesson'. Suggestion: say 'learned to type on a keyboard in high school during computer lessons.'

× I practiced regularly there, so by the time I finished school I was able to type quite quickly and accurately.

✓ I practiced regularly there, so by the time I finished school I was able to type quite quickly and accurately.

No correction needed: sentence is grammatically correct. Verb forms and tense are consistent. Explanation: 'practiced' and 'finished' correctly use past tense; word choice and order are appropriate.

× I haven't focused on formal training, but my typing has improved through daily use.

✓ I haven't focused on formal training, but my typing has improved through daily use.

No correction needed: present perfect tense 'has improved' is correct to describe change over time; 'haven't focused' correctly indicates lack of formal training.

× By doing a lot of computer work every day, I graduated my speed and accurately accuracy, and I also try to practice shortcuts to work more efficiently.

✓ By doing a lot of computer work every day, I increased my speed and accuracy, and I also try to practice shortcuts to work more efficiently.

Errors: 'graduated my speed' is incorrect collocation; use 'increased my speed'. 'accurately accuracy' mixes adverb and noun redundantly; use 'accuracy'. Suggestion: use 'increased my speed and accuracy' to clearly state improvement; keep parallel noun structure and correct collocations.