打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct basic grammar (articles, countable/uncountable nouns, and verb forms). Keep answer concise (2–3 sentences) and avoid repetitions.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to correct mistakes. For example, when I type I can use backspace to fix one wrong letter immediately, which saves time.

建议: State the main choice in a clear sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (because or so). Use correct prepositions and verb forms, and avoid extra words like "in" before 'laptop keyboard'.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and more convenient for my work. For instance, I can take my laptop to cafes and continue typing without interruption.

建议: Give a clear time reference and one concise explanation. Use correct past tense and clearer phrasing (e.g. "learned in the winter during a three-month holiday"), avoid unclear words like 'teen pass' or 'loan'.

示例: I learned to type in the winter when I had a three-month school holiday. During that break I attended a computer class where I practiced typing every day.

建议: Answer with one clear method and a brief result. Use correct grammar and simple vocabulary to explain how you practiced (e.g. exercises, lessons, regular practice). Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing.

示例: I improved my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and lessons. After several weeks of practice, my fingers became faster and I can type accurately without looking at the keys.

× I prefer a typing because in a typing we send.

✓ I prefer typing because when we type we can send it.

Incorrect use of the article 'a' before the uncountable noun 'typing' and awkward phrase 'in a typing we send'. Use no article with the gerund/uncountable noun 'typing'. Also clarify the clause: 'when we type we can send it' to express the intended meaning.

× We only write correct answer in handwriting.

✓ We only write the correct answers by hand.

Missing article and incorrect phrasing: 'correct answer' should be plural or with 'the' depending on context; 'handwriting' used incorrectly to mean 'by hand'. 'By hand' or 'in handwriting' is preferable. Also plural 'answers' matches general statement.

× If our one letter is mistake then whole sentence is mistake.

✓ If one letter in our answer is wrong, then the whole sentence is wrong.

Word order and word choice errors: 'our one letter' is unnatural; use 'one letter in our answer'. 'Is mistake' should be 'is wrong'. Also add comma before 'then' for clarity.

× That's why I prefer typing.

✓ That's why I prefer typing.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It was included to show it fits previous context.

× I type on laptop keyboard everyday because in a laptop keyboard that's easy to typing for me.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because using a laptop keyboard is easier for me.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'; 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'In a laptop keyboard' is incorrect preposition use; use 'using' or 'on'. 'That's easy to typing' mixes structures — correct is 'is easier for me' or 'is easy for me to use'.

× I learn in winter.

✓ I learned in the winter.

Tense error: the question asks 'When did you learn', so past tense 'learned' is required. Also use 'the winter' to specify the season.

× My teen pass and my holiday come for three months.

✓ I finished my term and my holidays lasted three months.

This sentence has vocabulary and structure problems: 'My teen pass' is unclear; likely 'term' or 'school term' and it should be 'finished' or 'ended'. 'My holiday come for three months' should be 'my holidays lasted three months' or 'I had a three-month holiday'.

× In three months I loan in a computer class That's why.

✓ During those three months I took a computer class. That's why.

Wrong verb 'loan' and incorrect preposition 'in'. Use 'took' (past tense) to indicate attending a class and 'during' or 'in' with 'those three months'. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× I improve my finger to typing a keyboard uh in a new my finger does not work for in a keyboard, but nowadays I can work in keyboard.

✓ I improved my typing with my fingers; at first my fingers did not work well on the keyboard, but nowadays I can use the keyboard.

Multiple tense and structure issues: use past tense 'improved' to describe how you practiced; 'improve my finger to typing a keyboard' is ungrammatical. 'my finger does not work for in a keyboard' should be 'my fingers did not work well on the keyboard'. 'Work in keyboard' should be 'use the keyboard'. Make consistent past-to-present contrast: 'at first... but nowadays...'.