打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (tenses, articles) and unclear pronoun use. Add one specific reason or short example with a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I have written with pen and paper for over twenty years, and I even trained in calligraphy. Therefore, I find handwriting more comfortable and expressive than typing.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop) and then give one or two concise, specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid listing many unrelated functions in one sentence.

示例: I type on a desktop every day because my office computer runs specialised software for posture and facial analysis. As a result, I prefer the desktop for work tasks that require secure data and specialised tools.

建议: Give a concise timeline: start with a clear time phrase, then briefly describe how you learned and add one specific detail (e.g., copying texts, classes). Correct tense and reduce redundancy.

示例: I started learning to type during my university years when my father gave me a personal computer. Initially I practised by copying texts, and later I took formal typing classes and used a typing tutor app to improve my speed.

建议: Be specific and fluent: state the methods clearly (app, online/offline classes), explain one concrete practice or result (e.g., increased speed or accuracy), avoid filler words and vague phrases like 'rule and regulation'.

示例: I improve my typing with a dedicated tutor app that provides timed exercises and accuracy feedback. In addition, I took both online and in-person classes, which taught proper finger placement and helped me increase speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer handwriting over typing because I am used to write more with pen and paper as compared to type on keyboard.

✓ I prefer handwriting over typing because I am used to writing more with pen and paper compared to typing on a keyboard.

The phrase 'used to' when meaning accustomed to should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing). Also parallel structure requires 'typing' to match 'writing', and 'on keyboard' needs the article 'a keyboard'. Improve by using gerunds and parallel forms: 'used to writing' and 'typing on a keyboard'.

× It has been almost more than two decade since I am doing this writing practice.

✓ It has been almost more than two decades since I started this writing practice.

The present perfect 'has been' with a time period requires correct plural 'decades' and the clause 'since' should be followed by a past simple verb for a finished starting point: 'since I started'. 'I am doing' is incorrect here. Use 'since I started' or 'for almost two decades'.

× That's why I'm very strong at writing and got training of calligraphy too at that's why I always prefer type.

✓ That's why I'm very good at writing; I also received calligraphy training, so I prefer handwriting.

Sentence is run-on and contains unclear phrases. 'Strong at writing' is unnatural; use 'good at writing'. 'Got training of calligraphy' should be 'received calligraphy training'. Remove the duplicate 'that's why' and make a logical connection: training leads to preference for handwriting.

× During my office hours I always type on desktop because it has a special software that helps me to do posture analysis as well as face muscle analysis and to secure my data and to make my daily list of stationery as well as household.

✓ During my office hours I always type on a desktop because it has special software that helps me perform posture analysis and facial muscle analysis, secure my data, and make my daily lists for stationery and household items.

Use 'a desktop' (indefinite article). 'A special software' should be 'special software' or 'a special piece of software'. Parallel verbs need consistent forms: 'helps me perform', 'secure', 'make'. 'Face muscle analysis' is better as 'facial muscle analysis' and list items clearer as 'lists for stationery and household items'.

× During my graduation day when my father gifted me my personal computer, that time I started typing, I was just copying the text and type on the keyboard.

✓ On the day of my graduation when my father gifted me my personal computer, I started typing; at that time I was just copying text and typing on the keyboard.

Use past simple: 'gifted' and 'started' are correct but 'that time I started' is awkward—use 'I started typing'. 'I was just copying the text and type' mixes tenses; use past continuous 'was just copying' and gerund 'typing' for parallelism. Also use 'on the day of my graduation' for clarity.

× And then I realized I had to take some formal training for this typing and I attended some classes as well as downloaded a typing app tutor that.

✓ Then I realized I needed to take formal typing training, so I attended some classes and downloaded a typing tutor app.

Use past tense 'realized' and past modal 'needed' rather than 'had to' (both acceptable but 'needed' reads better). 'Downloaded a typing app tutor that' is awkward; reorder to 'downloaded a typing tutor app'. Keep sentence concise and logical: realization led to actions in the past.

× I downloaded an app typing tutor app that helps me, uh, incredibly.

✓ I downloaded a typing tutor app that helps me incredibly.

Redundant 'app typing tutor app' corrected to 'a typing tutor app'. Use gerund 'typing' as part of noun phrase. Keep adverb placement after verb 'helps me incredibly'.

× Moreover, I took some classes online as well as offline that helps me to understand the rule and regulation and to keep the finger on particular word uh, which amazes.

✓ Moreover, I took some classes online and offline that helped me understand the rules and regulations and to keep my fingers on the correct keys, which was amazing.

'That helps' should match past 'took' so use 'helped'. Use plural 'rules and regulations'. 'Keep the finger on particular word' is incorrect: typing requires keeping fingers on the correct keys, and possessive 'my fingers'. 'Which amazes' must match past context: 'which was amazing'.