打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and accurate: begin with a clear topic sentence stating preference, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'handwriting' vs 'typing' contrast), avoid repetition and filler words, and provide one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' correctly.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer for most school assignments. For example, my teacher distributes tasks online, so I usually type my work on a laptop, which is faster and neater than writing by hand.

建议: Start with a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then add a concise reason and one specific time frame or habit. Reduce fillers and avoid mixed tenses; keep sentences coherent with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I type on a laptop every day. For the past few weeks I have been practicing IELTS writing on my laptop daily, and during school I also completed many PC-based assignments, so I use it regularly.

建议: Give a clear time reference and a complete, grammatically correct explanation. Remove hesitations and finish the sentence with a specific result or reason. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

示例: I learned to type during the COVID-19 pandemic because remote learning required frequent computer use. As classes moved online, I practised typing every day to complete assignments more quickly.

建议: Provide a clear present-tense method for improvement, describe the app succinctly with specific features or outcomes, and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to explain how the app helps you improve speed or accuracy.

示例: I improve my typing with an app called Sushida, which is popular in Japan. It turns practice into a game where I type words quickly to earn points, and this helps increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing compared to the handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A compared to B'. Also, do not use the definite article 'the' before uncountable nouns like 'handwriting' in this context.

× Ms. Go, the assignment are umm, handed out by the PC.

✓ Ms. Go, the assignments are handed out by the PC.

The subject 'assignments' is plural so the verb should be 'are'. Also 'assignment' should be plural if referring to multiple items; keep verb agreement between subject and verb.

× So we're just working on umm personal computer.

✓ So we're just working on personal computers.

When speaking generally about using a type of device, use the plural 'personal computers' or say 'a personal computer'. The original 'the personal computer' or 'personal computer' without article is incorrect for general reference.

× So for me it's like easier to do handwriting.

✓ So for me it's easier to do handwriting.

The filler 'like' is unnecessary and informal. Remove it to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear: 'it's easier to do handwriting.'

× Yes, I do. Umm, For example, currently for last two or three weeks I was preparing for IELTS writing exam.

✓ Yes, I do. For example, for the last two or three weeks I have been preparing for the IELTS writing exam.

Use 'for the last two or three weeks' for a period up to the present and the present perfect continuous 'have been preparing' to show an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also include the article 'the' before 'IELTS writing exam.'

× So I was using the laptop to practice writing umm exams every single day.

✓ So I used the laptop to practice writing exams every single day.

Use simple past 'used' for a completed past routine. If the routine continues to the present, use present perfect continuous. Avoid filler 'umm.'

× And also when I was in school, there are a lot of assignments on PC.

✓ Also, when I was in school, there were a lot of assignments on the PC.

Match tense: 'when I was in school' requires past tense 'there were.' Also include the article 'the' before 'PC' if referring to school computers, or use 'on PCs' for general reference.

× I learned it during the umm pandemic during a pandemic for COVID-19.

✓ I learned it during the COVID-19 pandemic.

Avoid repetition and use past simple 'learned' correctly. Combine phrases into 'during the COVID-19 pandemic.' Remove filler 'umm.'

× At that time, umm using laptop and typing on computer was becoming more more and more popular so and I need to be finish my.

✓ At that time, using laptops and typing on computers was becoming more and more popular, so I needed to finish my work.

Use plural 'laptops' and 'computers' for general statements. Use past tense 'was becoming' and 'needed' to match past context. 'Finish my' is incomplete; add 'work' or 'assignments.' Remove fillers and duplicated words.

× I improved my typing by using the app called Sushida, which is I think really popular in Japan for practicing, umm, typing.

✓ I improved my typing by using an app called Sushida, which I think is really popular in Japan for practicing typing.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before 'app' when introducing it. Move 'I think' to a natural position and remove extra commas and filler 'umm.'

× It's like a game that you type in the name of the words or like name of something, some kind of stuff, and then you have to do it as quickly as you can so you can get another point.

✓ It's like a game where you type the words or names of things, and you have to do it as quickly as you can to get points.

Simplify and clarify the sentence: use 'where' for describing the game, use 'words or names of things' instead of redundant phrases, and 'to get points' is clearer and more natural than 'so you can get another point.'