打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers, correct grammar, and give a specific supporting detail with a linking word. Also avoid vague phrases like "drop with the diagrams and under."

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I study I draw diagrams and annotate them, which makes it easier to organize and recall key points.

建议: Begin with a direct answer, simplify sentence structure, correct tense and article use, and add a clear reason. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly.

示例: Not every day; I usually don't use a desktop keyboard daily because I have been preparing for my English test. However, I type on a computer whenever I have assignments or application forms to complete.

建议: Give a concise, correctly structured answer with a clear timeline and a specific detail about learning. Use linking words to connect sentences smoothly.

示例: I learned to type in the 10th grade as part of our computer class. The teacher taught proper finger placement and gave regular exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

建议: Start with a direct answer and avoid awkward phrasing. Offer specific methods and routines, and use linking words like "for example" or "also" to add details. Correct idioms: use "practice makes perfect."

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I spend 15–20 minutes each day doing typing exercises and occasionally use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwritten notes uh rather than typing because when I whenever I write something, I can remember easily things and makes it easier to organize ideas.

✓ I prefer handwritten notes rather than typing because whenever I write something, I can remember things easily and it makes it easier to organize ideas.

Pronoun and subject reference errors: 'I can remember easily things' places the adverb before the object and uses awkward word order; 'makes it easier' lacks a clear subject — add 'it' to refer to handwriting. Also remove the repeated fillers 'uh' and 'when' to improve clarity. Suggestion: place adverb after the verb or after the object ('remember things easily') and include the subject for the clause ('it makes').

× For example, whenever I study, I drop with the diagrams and under.

✓ For example, whenever I study, I use diagrams and underline important points.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'drop with the diagrams and under' is not a valid English construction. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Replacing with 'use diagrams and underline important points' makes the meaning clear and grammatical.

× The recently I prepared my English test for going abroad for my further studies, so there's no need to type on keyboard for desktop every day but whenever I get some work.

✓ Recently I prepared for my English test to go abroad for further studies, so there is no need to type on a desktop keyboard every day, only when I have some work.

Multiple article and preposition issues: 'The recently' should be 'Recently'; 'prepared my English test for going abroad' should be 'prepared for my English test to go abroad' or 'prepared for the English test required to go abroad'; 'on keyboard for desktop' should be 'on a desktop keyboard'; 'whenever I get some work' is better as 'when I have some work'. Also replace contraction 'there's' with 'there is' acceptable but clarified. Suggestion: use correct articles ('a desktop keyboard') and proper prepositions ('prepared for','to go abroad').

× I learned in keyboard when I was in 10th grade.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in 10th grade.

Incorrect verb and preposition usage: 'learned in keyboard' is ungrammatical. The correct infinitive phrase is 'learned to type on the keyboard'. Also include 'the' before 'keyboard' and keep past tense consistent. Suggestion: use 'learned to [verb] on [device]'.

× My class it was part of our computer class and the teacher showed us right finger placement on the keyboard and how to practice.

✓ It was part of our computer class, and the teacher showed us the correct finger placement on the keyboard and how to practice.

Redundant pronoun 'My class it was' is wrong; use 'It was part of our computer class'. Missing article 'the' before 'correct finger placement' and adjective choice: 'right' should be 'correct'. Suggestion: remove redundant subject, add definite article and use appropriate adjective.

× So I improved.

✓ So I improved my typing.

Vague and incomplete sentence: 'So I improved' lacks an object and is ambiguous. Adding 'my typing' clarifies what improved and matches context. Suggestion: include the object of improvement.

× In my perspective, practice makes human perfect in everyday tasks or any other work.

✓ In my view, practice makes humans perfect in everyday tasks or any other work.

Article and noun form issues: 'In my perspective' is non-idiomatic; use 'In my view'. 'Makes human perfect' needs plural noun or article: 'makes humans perfect' or 'makes a person perfect'. Also consider that 'perfect' is strong; perhaps 'better' is more natural. Suggestion: use idiomatic phrase and correct noun form.

× So in my daily routine I am typing on the keyboard in the desktop.

✓ So in my daily routine I type on the desktop keyboard.

Preposition and tense/form issues: 'typing on the keyboard in the desktop' misuses 'in'. Use 'on the desktop keyboard' or 'on my desktop'. Also use simple present 'I type' for habitual action instead of 'I am typing'. Suggestion: use correct preposition and habitual tense.

× So I think that it could be improve my typing.

✓ So I think that it could improve my typing.

'be improve' is incorrect structure. After 'could' use the base verb 'improve' (modal + base). Alternatively 'could be improved' (passive) is possible. Here 'could improve my typing' (active) is clearer. Suggestion: use correct modal + base verb or modal + be + past participle for passive.