打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "the mistake" → "mistakes").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and makes correcting mistakes easier. Also, my handwriting is quite hard to read, so typing is more practical for me when I take notes or write assignments.

建议: Give a direct answer and provide specific reasons that are relevant (portability, convenience), and avoid vague phrases like "very trending." Use a linking word to connect reason to effect.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because it's portable and convenient for studying and working in different places. As a result, I can easily take my work to the library or a cafe.

建议: Combine sentences into one fluent response and correct grammar (use past tense consistently). Add a brief specific detail about what you learned to enrich the answer.

示例: I learned to type when I was in ninth grade during our computer practical lessons, where we practiced touch-typing and basic keyboard shortcuts.

建议: Be specific about the actions you take and use linking words to organize the answer. Remove repetition and mention measurable practice if possible (e.g., typing exercises, timed practice).

示例: I improve my typing by doing regular assignments and preparing presentations, and I also practice with online typing exercises for 15–20 minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to correct the mistake and my writing is very bad, so it's so it is very beneficial for me.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to correct mistakes, and my handwriting is very bad, so it is very beneficial for me.

Article errors and word choice: 'the mistake' implies a specific mistake; use plural 'mistakes' for general meaning. 'my writing' is acceptable but 'handwriting' is more precise. Also remove redundant 'so' and fix punctuation by joining clauses with 'and'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and choose the more specific noun 'handwriting'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I often type on a laptop because it is very trending nowadays and it is very useful.

✓ I often type on a laptop because it is very popular nowadays and very useful.

Incorrect collocation: 'trending' is used for topics on social media; 'popular' is better for general usage. Keep present simple 'is' for a general fact. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives like 'popular' for long-term trends rather than 'trending'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× When I was in the ninth grade. I learn learn how to type on keyboard because we had a computer practical lectures.

✓ When I was in the ninth grade, I learned how to type on the keyboard because we had practical computer lessons.

Multiple errors: sentence fragment 'When I was in the ninth grade.' should connect to main clause with a comma. 'learn learn' is a repetition and verb tense is wrong; use past 'learned' to match 'was'. Add definite article 'the' before 'keyboard'. 'computer practical lectures' is unnatural word order and countability: use 'practical computer lessons'. Suggestion: ensure clauses are joined, use past tense for past events, and correct noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I usually do some assignments as well as some as well as make some presentation to improve my typing.

✓ I usually do assignments and make presentations to improve my typing.

Redundancy and countability: phrase repeats 'as well as some as well as' making sentence ungrammatical. 'some presentation' should be plural 'presentations' or 'a presentation' depending on meaning. Simplify by using 'and' to connect verbs and use plural for general activities. Suggestion: remove redundant phrases and match noun number to general practice (plural for repeated actions). Grammar problem type ID:26