打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons linked with connectors. Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, at work I use my laptop and phone to type quickly, which saves time and makes editing easier.

建议: Give a full sentence with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Remove small grammar errors (specially → especially).

示例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day, especially my MacBook, because it is portable and comfortable to type on for long periods.

建议: Be precise about timing and use correct verb tenses. Use linking words to connect when you learned and who taught you. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences.

示例: I learned to type several years ago when my cousin in the Philippines taught me how to use a computer, and I practiced regularly after that.

建议: Answer with a present-tense strategy and specific actions. Use linking words to show sequence or reason, and finish your sentences. Give concrete practice methods and outcomes.

示例: I improve my typing by maintaining the correct hand position and practicing every day with online typing exercises, which helps increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I think typing and handwriting is somehow the same thing since it uses both hands, but I do prefer typing, especially in a work since I do have my laptop and my phone and it's quite.

✓ I think typing and handwriting are more or less the same since they both use the hands, but I prefer typing, especially at work, since I have my laptop and my phone and it’s convenient.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'typing and handwriting' is a plural subject so use 'are' not 'is'. Use 'they both use the hands' to refer back to plural subjects. 'I do prefer' is acceptable but more natural as 'I prefer'. Preposition 'in a work' is incorrect; use 'at work'. 'It's quite' is incomplete; 'it’s convenient' completes the idea and fits present tense. Suggestion: Match plural subjects with plural verbs, use natural collocations like 'at work', and finish incomplete adjectives with a clear descriptor.

× Yes. Specially laptop since I have my MacBook and I do use it every single day and it's very handy and very comfortable to use.

✓ Yes, especially my laptop, since I have a MacBook and I use it every single day; it is very handy and comfortable to use.

Word choice and adverb form: 'Specially' should be 'especially'. Add possessive 'my laptop' for clarity. 'I do use' is grammatically correct but unnecessary; simple present 'I use' is more natural. Contractions are fine but here expanded form 'it is' is clearer. Suggestion: Use 'especially' for emphasis, include possessive pronouns when referring to owned items, and prefer simple present for habitual actions.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard several years ago. Now my cousin who is in the Philippines teach me how to use, umm, computer. Yeah.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard several years ago. My cousin, who is in the Philippines, taught me how to use a computer.

Tense and subject-verb agreement: The second sentence should match past time frame 'taught' not 'teach'. Also article 'a computer' is required. Commas set off the relative clause 'who is in the Philippines'. Suggestion: Keep past events in past tense and use correct article before countable nouns.

× I improved my typing by learning the proper way to or the position of hands. And also you should practice every day so your hands could.

✓ I improved my typing by learning the proper hand position. You should also practice every day so your hands can become faster and more accurate.

Sentence structure and verb completion: 'the proper way to or the position of hands' is ungrammatical; 'proper hand position' is concise. 'And also you should' is better as 'You should also'. Final clause 'so your hands could' is incomplete and mixes modal past possibility; use 'can become' plus adjectives to express result. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases, place adverbs like 'also' after subject for natural order, and complete purpose/result clauses with a modal plus verb phrase (e.g., 'can become faster').