打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 在回答中要更直接并减少语气词和重复，使用清晰的主题句并提供一至两个具体原因。注意连词使用，使句子更连贯，例如 because, so, therefore 等。尽量控制在最多五句话内，避免填充词如 “uh” 和重复。

示例: I prefer handwriting because I have used paper for reading and note-taking since childhood. For study tasks, handwriting helps me concentrate better, whereas reading on a phone screen often distracts me due to notifications and eye strain. Therefore I usually choose paper for important notes.

建议: 回答应更简洁并纠正时态与语法错误，先给出直接回答（Yes, I do），然后补充一到两条具体信息，如频率和用途，使用连词如 because 或 recently 来连接细节。去掉重复词。

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop almost every day. I use it mainly to finish homework and, recently, to follow an online course about iOS development, which requires writing code and taking notes.

建议: 需给出明确的时间点并简要解释原因或背景，减少重复和填充词。可用连词 like because 或 when 来组织句子，使回答逻辑更清晰。保持句子简短且信息具体。

示例: I learned to type properly in high school when we had computer classes. During those lessons we practiced typing skills as part of our coursework, which helped me become more efficient.

建议: 回答要分过去和现在两个部分时，清楚区分并用连词连接。说明具体练习方法（例如每天练习多少时间、使用哪些练习网站或软件）会更有说服力。避免重复单词并完成句子。

示例: In high school I improved my typing by doing regular exercises in computer class. Now I practice on my laptop for about 15–20 minutes daily using online typing tutors like TypingClub to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting 'cause I think I have formed a habit of uh, uh, writing or reading just on papers since I was a child.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I have formed a habit of writing and reading on paper since I was a child.

句中“writing or reading just on papers”中"papers"复数和“on paper”更常用；使用并列连词“and”更通顺；将口语缩写‘cause改为正式because；去掉多余填充词。时态用现在完成时表从过去持续到现在的习惯，保持不变。建议：使用“on paper”和“writing and reading”，避免口语填充词。

× And if I have to do some study works on, uh, on the phone screen, I think most of the time I would, uh, be, I, I would dis, I would be, distract my attention, yes.

✓ If I have to do study work on a phone screen, most of the time it distracts my attention.

原句结构混乱，有重复和口语填充。将“study works”改为不可数名词“study work”或“studies”；将被动或复杂结构简化为主动“it distracts my attention”更自然并与一般现在时一致。建议：去掉重复词和填充，使用主体+动词的清晰结构。

× Yes I I I typed on my laptop almost every day since I have get getting into the got into the college.

✓ Yes, I have typed on my laptop almost every day since I got into college.

句子时态混用。使用“since”引导的时间点从过去发生，应使用现在完成时或过去完成时与具体时间点搭配。更自然的表达是“have typed... since I got into college”或直接“have typed... since entering college”。同时删除多余重复词和不正确的形式“have get getting”。建议：确定主时态并简化时间状语的表达。

× I need to type on my laptop to finish my homework and recently I need to use this use this scale to learning iOS for writing and lesson.

✓ I need to type on my laptop to finish my homework, and recently I have needed to use a tool to learn iOS for writing lessons.

原句重复“use this use this”，词类错误“to learning”应为不定式“to learn”或现在完成“have needed to”。“scale”疑为错误词，改为“tool”或“software”。确保并列句连贯并使用正确的动词形式。建议：避免重复，确保不定式和现在完成时正确使用，选择合适名词代替不正确词。

× I learned that scarefully in the high school, I think because at that time, uh, we have some, uh, we had some, uh, uh, science and, uh, computer subjects, uh, when, when uh, we need to, uh, needed to, uh, learn some, uh, typing skills and uh, uh, that's, uh, and have.

✓ I learned that carefully in high school because at that time we had science and computer subjects, and we needed to learn some typing skills.

句中时态与词形混用，存在拼写错误“scarefully”应为“carefully”；“in the high school”应为“in high school”；多次重复和填充词造成语义不清。将整个句子整理为过去时“learned... because we had... and we needed...”更符合时间背景。建议：使用正确拼写（carefully），删除重复填充词，统一使用过去时描述过去发生的学习经历。

× Actually, when I was in high school, I we need to we needed to do a lot of exercise and practice in the computer class.

✓ Actually, when I was in high school, we needed to do a lot of exercises and practice in computer class.

句中有主谓重复“I we need to we needed”，应删除多余部分并统一时态为过去时“needed”。“exercise”应使用复数“exercises”。“in the computer class”改为“in computer class”更自然。建议：删去重复，注意名词单复数和时态一致。

× And for now, I usually practice the practice typing just by myself on my laptop to use some keyboard and and to promote my.

✓ Now I usually practice typing by myself on my laptop, using some keyboard apps to improve my skills.

原句“practice the practice typing”重复且冗余；“to use some keyboard”结构不完整，应使用动名词短语“using some keyboard apps”；“to promote my”不完整，改为“to improve my skills”。建议：避免重复名词，使用动名词短语和完整搭配（improve skills）。