打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., “prefer typing to handwriting,” “easy to read”).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is often hard for others to read. Moreover, typing lets me quickly edit and share messages on my laptop or phone, which is very convenient when I’m communicating with others.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then support with two concise reasons linked logically. Reduce hesitation and redundant phrases. Use correct articles and plurals (e.g., “a laptop with me,” “emails”).

示例: I always use my laptop to type because I carry it to work and it’s much more portable than a desktop. Consequently, I can send emails and edit documents anywhere, which is more convenient for my job.

建议: Give a direct answer first (e.g., “I learned in college”), then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repeating the same idea and fix grammar (e.g., “I preferred a laptop to a desktop”).

示例: I learned to type when I was in college because I bought a laptop to work on a major project. I preferred a laptop to a desktop since I could take it to classes and work on assignments anywhere.

建议: Answer directly and provide a specific method or routine (e.g., timed practice, typing apps). Use linking words and correct tense and repetition. Keep to 1–3 sentences for clarity.

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: I spend 20–30 minutes a day on typing exercises and use online typing tests to measure my speed. This daily routine helped me increase my speed while working on a large project.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A rather than B' when expressing preference; 'rather than' is possible but 'prefer to' is more natural here.

× It's because my handwriting is too hard to read for a person and typing is OK when I can express my feelings or I can express or convey my words through typing in a laptop or any phone or mobile phone.

✓ It's because my handwriting is too hard for people to read, and typing lets me express my feelings and convey my words on a laptop or a mobile phone.

Change word order and choice: 'too hard for people to read' is the correct structure; avoid repetition ('express or convey'); use 'lets me' instead of 'is OK when I can' for clarity; 'a laptop or a mobile phone' is concise and grammatical.

× I always type in laptop keyboards because as a working woman I have laptop with me I need to carry everywhere so it's easy for me to send message or e-mail.

✓ I always type on laptop keyboards because, as a working woman, I have a laptop with me that I need to carry everywhere, so it's easy for me to send messages or emails.

Use 'type on' not 'type in'; include articles ('a laptop'); pluralize 'messages' and 'emails'; add relative clause 'that I need...' and commas for clarity.

× Or I can also type the document in laptop everywhere rather than desktop, so it's more comfortable for me.

✓ I can also type documents on my laptop anywhere rather than on a desktop, so it's more comfortable for me.

Use 'type on' and plural 'documents' or 'the document' consistently; include possessive 'my laptop' or article; 'anywhere rather than on a desktop' is clearer.

× When I was in college, I bought a keyboard for myself because I had to complete my project and I prefer to buy a laptop rather than the desktop because I can carry that one everywhere and I can take that one to my college and I can communicate with my people.

✓ When I was in college, I bought a keyboard for myself because I had to complete my project, and I preferred to buy a laptop rather than a desktop because I could carry it everywhere and take it to college to communicate with people.

Maintain past tense: use 'preferred' and 'could' instead of present tense 'prefer' and 'can'; remove repetitive 'that one' and 'my people' -> 'people'.

× So it's.

✓ So that's why I chose a laptop.

The original is an incomplete sentence. Provide a complete clause that summarizes the idea: 'That's why I chose a laptop.'

× I improve my typing through practice.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing.

Both are acceptable, but 'by practicing' emphasizes the action. Use gerund after 'by' for clarity.

× As I said, I had I had to complete a big project, so the day by day typing it was help me to increase my typing speed and it's very easy for me to type anywhere when I when I getting time whenever getting time, I.

✓ As I said, I had to complete a big project, so typing every day helped me increase my typing speed, and now it's easy for me to type anywhere whenever I have time.

Remove duplicated 'I had'; use past tense 'helped' for completed action; change 'day by day typing' to 'typing every day'; use 'whenever I have time' for correct present-tense habitual meaning; complete the sentence.