打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g. “tapping banner”). Keep it under five sentences.

示例: I prefer typing for quick communication, but I like handwriting for studying. For example, I type when chatting with friends because it is faster and more convenient. However, I handwrite notes during lectures because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

建议: Answer clearly and directly: say which device you use daily, then give one reason with a linking word. Use correct vocabulary (desktop, laptop, phone, keyboard) and avoid vague phrases like “daily juice”.

示例: I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I mainly use my mobile phone for typing. Because I am often on the move, my phone is more convenient for messaging and taking quick notes.

建议: Provide a specific time reference and brief context. Start with a clear time phrase (e.g. “When I was 10” or “a few years ago”), then explain how you learned and on what device. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about twelve, mostly by practicing on my family's computer. Later, I adapted to my phone's keyboard and improved by texting and using apps.

建议: Give concrete methods with linking words and correct vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence describing your main method, then add two specific examples (practicing, using apps, typing exercises). Avoid repetition and incorrect words like “bays.”

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice on my phone. For instance, I chat with friends frequently and write notes, and I also use typing practice apps to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer both, sometime I like tapping banner I I usually talk with my friends and sometimes I prefer to handwriting because it's some make some notes.

✓ I prefer both. Sometimes I like tapping on banners. I usually talk with my friends and sometimes I prefer handwriting because I want to make some notes.

Errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). Missing punctuation created run-on sentence; break into shorter sentences. 'tapping banner' needs preposition 'on' and plural 'banners' for general meaning (singular/plural issue). Extra 'I I' is repetition. 'to handwriting' is incorrect; use gerund 'handwriting' without to or use 'to write by hand'. 'it's some make some notes' is ungrammatical; use 'I want to make some notes' or 'to make some notes'. Suggestion: use correct adverb forms, add necessary prepositions, fix pluralization, and separate ideas into clear sentences.

× No, I don't know the daily juice keyboard, laptop and desktop. I choose my mobile phone as a tapping.

✓ No, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard daily. I choose my mobile phone for typing.

Errors: 'don't know the daily juice keyboard' is unintelligible—probably meant 'don't use... daily'. Use article 'a' with countable nouns ('a desktop or laptop keyboard'). 'as a tapping' is incorrect phrase and word choice; use 'for typing'. Suggestion: replace incorrect words with correct verbs and nouns, add articles where needed, and use the noun 'typing' for the activity.

× I do not. Learn how to tap on keyboard because I use only my mobile phone keyboard.

✓ I did not learn how to type on a keyboard because I only use my mobile phone keyboard.

Errors: Tense and sentence structure: 'I do not. Learn' is broken and missing proper verb form. Use past tense 'did not learn' to answer 'When did you learn...' if the action did not occur. 'tap on keyboard' is informal; use 'type on a keyboard' and include article 'a'. 'only' should be placed before 'use' or before 'my mobile phone keyboard' for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense for events that did not happen and correct verb choice and word order.

× I improve my tapping many many bays like chatting with my friends and making the notes at my phone.

✓ I improve my typing in many ways, like chatting with my friends and taking notes on my phone.

Errors: 'improve my tapping' – use 'typing' for the activity. 'many many bays' should be 'many ways' (word choice). 'making the notes at my phone' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'taking notes on my phone'. Use gerund forms correctly: 'chatting' and 'taking' are fine. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('typing','ways','taking notes') and use proper prepositions ('on my phone') and punctuation (comma).