打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Потрібно покращити граматику та зв’язність відповіді: використовуйте чітке вступне речення, потім одне-два пояснювальні речення з конкретним прикладом. Уникайте зайвих пауз і повторів (наприклад, “uh”, “to”), та виправте формулювання (наприклад, “when you write on paper, you remember information better”).

示例: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I write down new English words in a notebook, I review them later and retain them more effectively.

建议: Потрібно покращити вимову і точність лексики, а також граматику та порядок слів. Замініть некоректні слова (наприклад, “rot” на “type”) і зробіть відповідь більш лаконічною. Додайте зв’язку причини з результатом: “so I often use…”

示例: Yes, I type on a laptop almost every day because my classes are online. As a result, I’m quite comfortable typing essays and messages quickly.

建议: Потрібно виправити граматичні помилки та зайві слова, використовувати просту чітку структуру: тема + причина + короткий приклад. Уникайте розмовних вставок як “you know” і неправильної форми дієслів (наприклад, “her typed” → “she typed”).

示例: I learned to type when I was five because my mother worked online and showed me how to use the keyboard. She practised typing with me every day, which helped me improve quickly.

建议: Потрібно зробити відповідь більш зрозумілою і граматично правильною: поясніть, яка саме програма або гра, як часто ви її використовуєте, і які результати отримали. Уникайте невизначених фраз (“the idea”) і часових плутанин (“every day in the past”).

示例: I practise using a typing game that focuses on speed and accuracy, and I play it for about 15 minutes every day. Since I started, my typing speed and accuracy have improved noticeably.

× To be honest, I prefer handwriting because when you wrote on paper something your memories information and I think it's important to, uh, to use handwrite when you study, for example, new words in English.

✓ To be honest, I prefer handwriting because when you write something on paper it helps your memory, and I think it's important to use handwriting when you study, for example, new English words.

Tense and verb form: 'wrote' is past tense but the general statement needs simple present 'write' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). Word order and choice: 'something on paper' is the correct order rather than 'wrote on paper something'. 'handwrite' is not the correct noun; use 'handwriting' or the verb phrase 'to write by hand'. Sentence structure: add 'it helps your memory' to clarify meaning and connect clauses properly (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use simple present for general truths, place object after verb, and use 'handwriting' or 'write by hand'.

× Yes I do, I type on a laptop keyboard almost every day when I'm studying because in my school we study in online format so I have to rot in keyboard some text.

✓ Yes I do. I type on a laptop keyboard almost every day when I'm studying because at my school we study online, so I have to type some text on the keyboard.

Word choice and form: 'rot in keyboard' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'type' and the prepositional phrase is 'type ... on the keyboard' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 8: Verb + -ing form not applicable here). Tense: 'we study in online format' should be 'we study online' or 'in an online format' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 11). Suggestion: use 'type' and 'on the keyboard', and 'study online' for natural phrasing.

× You know I learned it when I was 5 because my mom works online and her typed on keyboard every day so she started me to do this.

✓ You know, I learned it when I was five because my mom works online and she typed on the keyboard every day, so she encouraged me to do this.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'her typed' is ungrammatical — use 'she typed' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns). Tense consistency: 'learned' is past, but 'works online' is present; if mother still works online, keep 'works' but clarify: 'she works online and types on the keyboard every day' or use past 'worked'/'typed' if referring to past habit (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue and ID 6: Present tense issue). 'she started me to do this' is incorrect; use 'she encouraged me to do this' or 'she taught me' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: ensure subject pronouns match and choose verbs that reflect the intended timeframe; use 'encouraged' or 'taught' for causing someone to start an activity.

× I just downloaded the game the idea which is typing faster and faster every day. I really play this every day in the past, so I improve my time typing now.

✓ I just downloaded a game called 'The Idea' that helps me type faster and faster every day. I used to play it every day in the past, so now my typing speed has improved.

Verb forms and tense: 'which is typing faster' is incorrect; use a relative clause 'that helps me type faster' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8: Verb + -ing form and ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 'I really play this every day in the past' mixes present and past; use 'I used to play it every day' for past habit (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'so I improve my time typing now' is awkward; use present perfect 'my typing speed has improved' to show result continuing to present (Grammar Problem Type ID 9: past participle use). Suggestion: keep tenses consistent, use 'helps me type', 'used to', and 'has improved' for clarity.