打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сделайте ответ более естественным и грамматически правильным: исправьте время и согласование (например, «it helps me»), сократите лишние вводные фразы и добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения для поддержки мнения. Используйте связку для плавного перехода между утверждениями (например, «however» или «but»).

示例: I find typing more comfortable for everyday tasks; however, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For instance, when I take handwritten notes, I recall facts more easily during revision.

建议: Улучшите плавность и точность выражения: замените «unfortunately» на более уместное вступление и исправьте артикли и формулировку («a laptop» -> «a laptop»; «on the desktop» -> «on a desktop computer»). Добавьте короткое объяснение, почему вы много печатаете.

示例: I don't own a laptop, so I use a desktop computer every day. As a video editor, I type a lot to name files, write scripts and communicate with clients, which keeps my keyboard skills sharp.

建议: Сделайте ответ более сжатым и грамматически правильным: уберите избыточные слова и исправьте порядок слов (например, «on my 9th birthday» и «when I was nine»). Добавьте небольшую конкретику о процессе обучения (как вы учились).

示例: I learned to type when I was nine. My parents gave me a computer for my ninth birthday, and I started practising by playing typing games and writing simple documents.

建议: Исправьте грамматику (ударение на единственном/множественном числе, убрать двойной глагол «helps helped») и сделайте ответ более конкретным: назовите типы игр или другие методы (курсы, практика с текстами). Используйте связку для логики (например, «for example»).

示例: I improve my typing mainly through online practice tools. For example, I use typing games and timed drills on websites to increase my speed, and I also practise by transcribing short articles to improve accuracy.

× To tell you the truth, typing is more comfortable for me, but I prefer handwriting because it help me memorize better.

✓ To tell you the truth, typing is more comfortable for me, but I prefer handwriting because it helps me memorize better.

The verb must agree with the third person singular subject 'it' (referring to handwriting). Use 'helps' not 'help'. Suggestion: add -s for third person singular in present simple verbs.

× Unfortunately I don't have laptop, but I am a video editor so I do type on the desktop every day.

✓ Unfortunately I don't have a laptop, but I am a video editor so I do type on the desktop every day.

Countable singular nouns in English usually require an article. 'Laptop' is a singular countable noun and needs 'a' before it. Suggestion: use 'a laptop' or 'the laptop' if referring to a specific one.

× In my 9th birthday party, my parents gave me a present. It was a new computer, so I learned how to type on a keyboard at when I was 9.

✓ At my 9th birthday party, my parents gave me a present. It was a new computer, so I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was nine.

Word order and preposition use are incorrect. Use 'at my 9th birthday party' not 'in'. Also 'at when I was 9' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was nine'. Additionally, write numbers up to ten in words in formal writing. Suggestion: correct preposition and remove extra 'at'.

× There are a lot of different special games in the Internet which helps helped me to improve my typing.

✓ There are a lot of different special games on the Internet which have helped me to improve my typing.

Multiple issues: preposition should be 'on' the Internet. The clause 'which helps helped me' mixes tenses; use present perfect 'have helped' to express past actions with present relevance. Also 'games' plural requires plural verb. Suggestion: use 'have helped' and 'on the Internet'.