打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, correct grammar, and give clear reasons with specific details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because my handwriting looks neater and more personal. For example, when I take notes by hand I remember information better, and I practice regularly to keep my script consistent.

建议: Give a direct answer, correct small grammatical errors, and remove repetition. Use linking words to add one specific reason or example to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I am a university student and most of my assignments and research are done on my laptop. For instance, I use it for essays, emails, and online classes.

建议: Respond with a clear time reference and correct sentence structure. Provide one specific circumstance that explains why and when you learned. Avoid fragmented clauses and unclear sequencing.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 12, long before university, because my parents bought me a laptop for schoolwork. Later, when I entered university, I improved my skills further because I needed to do extensive research and assignments.

建议: Give a focused methodical answer with specific actions and use linking words. Correct wording (e.g., 'theses' -> 'theses' or 'journal articles') and avoid vague repetitions. Mention measurable progress if possible.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily using online typing exercises and by typing my essays and research articles. As a result, my speed has increased and my error rate has decreased, which helps me finish assignments faster.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing because my handwriting is way more beautiful than I everyone and I do a lot of practice while handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing because my handwriting is much more beautiful than everyone's, and I practice a lot when I write by hand.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and unclear comparison. 'than I everyone' is wrong; use 'than everyone's' to compare handwriting. 'way more' is informal; 'much more' is appropriate. Also combine clauses with 'and' and use 'when I write by hand' for clarity.

× I do type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I I'm a university student so I do need to work a lot of typing on my laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm a university student, so I need to do a lot of typing on my laptop.

Remove unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in affirmative present statements. 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). Also fix repeated 'I' and streamline phrase order. Use 'need to do a lot of typing' for correct collocation.

× So yeah, everyday I do type on a laptop keyboard.

✓ So yeah, every day I type on a laptop keyboard.

Again 'everyday' should be 'every day'. Unnecessary 'do' is not needed in simple present affirmative statements. Use present tense 'type' to match habitual action.

× I did learn to type on a keyboard at a young age because my father got me the laptop when I whenever I admitted into a university, so I had to do a lot of research work so it needs.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard at a young age because my father got me a laptop when I was admitted to university, so I had to do a lot of research work.

Delete unnecessary past auxiliary 'did' in simple past. Use 'learned' (simple past). 'the laptop' should be 'a laptop.' 'when I whenever I admitted into a university' is ungrammatical; correct to 'when I was admitted to university.' Remove final 'so it needs' which is incomplete.

× Basically I improve my typing by practicing a lot.

✓ Basically, I improve my typing by practicing a lot.

Add comma after introductory adverb for clarity. Grammar is correct: 'practicing' as gerund is properly used after 'by'. No other change needed.

× I do practice every day and I type lots of journal theses works and columns in my laptop and I also search a lot so that I need to type.

✓ I practice every day, and I type many journal articles, theses, and columns on my laptop. I also do a lot of online research, which requires me to type.

Replace informal 'lots of' with precise quantifier 'many' for countable items. Use correct nouns: 'journal articles' and 'theses.' 'on my laptop' is better than 'in my laptop.' Clarify second clause: 'I also do a lot of online research, which requires me to type.'