打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer typing to handwriting") and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler phrases and unclear fragments.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use digital devices for most tasks. For example, at work I type emails and notes every day, so my handwriting has become less practiced.

建议: Correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Answer directly then support with one specific detail. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day, especially at work. For example, I send emails and chat with colleagues and friends, so I type a lot throughout the day.

建议: Give a clear time reference and a reason, using past tense correctly. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences and avoid repetition.

示例: I learned to type when I was a teenager because I played computer games a lot. Playing games helped me become familiar with the keyboard early on.

建议: Provide a clear explanation of methods you use to improve typing or state honestly if you haven’t practiced. Use linking words like "however" or "so" and avoid uncertainty phrases such as repeated "I think" or "I don't know."

示例: I haven't practiced formal typing exercises, but I improved naturally by using a computer every day for work and gaming. However, I plan to use online typing lessons to increase accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing than handwriting because nowadays I am not writing anymore.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because nowadays I do not write much anymore.

Use 'prefer to' when comparing two actions or things; 'prefer...than' is incorrect. Also 'am not writing anymore' is awkward; use simple present for habitual action: 'do not write much anymore.' Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and simple present for habits.

× I usually tap when I am at work and you know my handwriting my hand.

✓ I usually type when I am at work, and you know my handwriting is messy.

Sentence was ungrammatical and unclear. 'Tap' is informal and odd for typing; use 'type'. The second clause lacked a verb and clear meaning; supply 'is messy' to describe handwriting. Keep parallel structure and include a verb.

× I usually typing on the keyboard every day, especially at work because I used to, uh, send the e-mail and some chat with my friend or my girlfriend.

✓ I usually type on the keyboard every day, especially at work, because I used to send emails and chat with my friends or my girlfriend.

After 'usually' use base verb 'type', not 'typing'. 'Send the e-mail' should be 'send emails' (plural and no article). 'Some chat' is incorrect; use 'chat' as a verb. Correct verb forms and noun plurality for natural speech.

× And yes, I do type a lot a day like.

✓ Yes, I do type a lot every day.

Original sentence fragments and wrong word order. Use 'every day' for frequency and remove filler 'like.' Maintain complete clause: subject+verb+object/adverb.

× When I was young I was a real gamer so I always use my computer and also keyboard to play a game.

✓ When I was young I was a real gamer, so I always used my computer and keyboard to play games.

Sequence of past actions requires past tense 'used' not present 'use.' Also 'play a game' can be plural 'play games' for habitual past. Keep tense consistent.

× And sure I the answer is I use I have used keyboard.

✓ The short answer is that I used a keyboard.

Original is disfluent and mixes tenses. Provide a concise, grammatical response in past if referring to past use: 'I used a keyboard' or present perfect 'I have used a keyboard' if emphasizing experience. Keep one clear tense and simple structure.

× My people around me usually say that why I type so fast and I don't have an answer to them because it happened and I don't know because I I don't practice typing I think.

✓ People around me usually ask why I type so fast, and I do not have an answer for them because it just happened; I do not know because I think I did not practice typing.

'My people around me' is unnatural; use 'People around me.' 'Say that why' is incorrect: use 'ask why.' 'Answer to them' should be 'answer for them' or 'an answer.' Tense and phrasing were confused: clarify with 'it just happened' and consistent past or present forms. Remove repeated words and provide clearer clause structure.