打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更自然并稍作扩展。可以先直接回答，然后用一两句具体原因或情境说明，不要太冗长。注意语法准确（如时态和冠词），避免模糊表达。

示例: I prefer typing. During my graduate studies I typed most of my assignments and research notes, so it became a habit. Typing is faster for me and makes editing much easier.

建议: 句子结构和语法有明显错误，表达不够清晰。应先直接回答（desktop or laptop），然后用一两句说明原因。注意主谓一致、动词形态及更自然的词汇搭配。

示例: I usually type on my laptop. I prefer my own laptop because I’m more familiar with its keyboard and settings, while the desktop at my company is shared and less convenient.

建议: 答案太模糊且有语法问题。应给出更具体的时间范围或经历，并用连接词使句子连贯。避免用模糊或不自然的短语。

示例: I can’t remember the exact year, but I really improved my typing during my graduate studies when I had to write long reports and papers. By then I had mastered the basic skills.

建议: 虽然意思明确，但语法错误和句子结构需改进。可以先直接回答，再提供理由或未来计划（即使没有计划也可以说明原因）。注意主谓一致和更自然的表达。

示例: At present my job doesn’t require advanced typing skills, so I don’t have plans to improve them right now. However, if I needed to type more in the future, I would practice with online typing exercises or take a short course.

× I am type in laptop and because the laptop owns too many, the desktop owns to the company. So I tend to type in my own laptop.

✓ I type on my laptop, and because the company owns the desktop computers, I tend to type on my own laptop.

问题在于代词与动词搭配及句子结构不当：原句中“I am type”使用了不正确的动词形式和助动词，应该用一般现在时“I type”。此外“the laptop owns too many, the desktop owns to the company”中文逻辑混乱，实际意思应是“公司拥有台式电脑”，应使用主动结构“the company owns the desktop computers”。改正建议：使用正确的动词形式和主语，保持句子连贯，使用介词on表示在键盘上打字。

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I can't recall the exact time, but through graduate practice I must. I mastered this skill.

✓ I can't recall the exact time, but I must have mastered this skill during my graduate studies.

问题在时态和动词短语使用：原句“through graduate practice I must. I mastered this skill.”时态混用且语序不自然。应使用现在完成推测“must have mastered”来表达过去通过学习已掌握某技能的推测，且将时间状语放在句中合适位置。改正建议：使用情态动词完成时（must have + 过去分词）来表示对过去事实的推测，并将时间状语用during my graduate studies或during my graduate practice。

× At present, the job I am engaged in don't need typing skills, so I have no plan to improve my typing skills.

✓ At present, the job I am engaged in doesn't require typing skills, so I have no plans to improve my typing skills.

问题包括主谓一致和动词搭配：原句中主语是单数短语“the job I am engaged in”，但用了复数否定“don't”。应使用第三人称单数否定“doesn't”。同时动词搭配更自然的是“require typing skills”而不是“need typing skills”。另外“no plan”常用复数“no plans”。改正建议：注意主语与助动词的一致，并选择更地道的动词搭配。