打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / so). Reduce fillers (uh, umm, you know) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "handwriting" not "running with my own hand").

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I feel more comfortable with pen and paper and it helps me remember information. For example, when I study for exams I find writing notes by hand makes it easier to recall facts later, so I usually choose handwriting for important work.

建议: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word (because / so). Remove fillers and correct small errors (e.g., "light" -> "lightweight", "easy to type" -> "easy to type on"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I only have a laptop at home. It is lightweight and portable, so I can bring it anywhere, and the keyboard is comfortable to type on for long periods.

建议: Be precise about timing and avoid confusing or irrelevant details. Answer with a clear time phrase (e.g., "when I was in elementary school"), then give one simple, relevant reason or brief description of what you learned. Do not introduce incorrect or unrelated terms like "AI" or "algorithm" unless accurate. Use correct grammar and reduce hesitations.

示例: I learned how to use a keyboard when I was in elementary school. My teacher showed us the basic keys and simple typing exercises to help us become faster and more accurate.

建议: Start with a clear statement about your current level, then explain one or two specific methods you use to improve, using linking words (for example, "for example" or "so"). Describe the app briefly and the benefit (e.g., improves speed/accuracy). Avoid repetition and fillers.

示例: I'm still working on my typing skills, so I practice with a typing app that my junior high teacher recommended. For example, the app uses a game where words pop up and you earn points for typing them correctly, which helps me improve my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer, uh, handwriting because I'm not used to using computers, so I, I don't even remember, uh, which key is in where.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not used to using computers, so I don't even remember which key is where.

Remove redundant commas and repetitions; 'is in where' is incorrect word order. Use 'which key is where' for correct word order. No third person singular verb issue here but sentence needed correction for word order and redundancy; categorized under third person singular issue per instruction only when applicable.

× I I'm sure I prefer umm running with my own hand then umm using keyboard of personal computers.

✓ I'm sure I prefer writing by hand rather than using a personal computer keyboard.

Original has incorrect verb choice 'running' and wrong comparative connector 'then' instead of 'than', and awkward 'using keyboard of personal computers.' Use 'writing by hand' and 'rather than' for contrast; correct word order and prepositional phrase 'personal computer keyboard.'

× Umm, I always use laptop keyboard 'cause I only have my laptop and, uh, there's no like, uh, desktop in my home yeah and I really like my laptop because it's a light so I can bring it anywhere easily and.

✓ I always use my laptop keyboard because I only have my laptop and there is no desktop in my home. I really like my laptop because it's light, so I can bring it anywhere easily.

Add definite article 'my' before 'laptop keyboard'; use 'there is' instead of 'there's no like' and remove filler. 'It's a light' is wrong; use 'it's light.' Split into two sentences for clarity. Classified as article errors and sentence structure errors.

× Uh, my keyboard on the laptop is, uh, very easy to type.

✓ The keyboard on my laptop is very easy to use for typing.

Original has incorrect structure 'easy to type.' Use 'easy to use for typing' or 'easy to type on.' Clarifies subject and correct verb phrase.

× I think the very first time, uh, I studied how to use laptop keyboard was umm, in my elementary school class.

✓ I think the first time I learned how to use a laptop keyboard was in elementary school.

Use 'learned' (past) because referring to a past event; 'studied how to use laptop keyboard' is awkward—use 'learned how to use a laptop keyboard.' Include article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard.' Classified under present tense issue because tense needed correction to past.

× And I thought it was, uh, about like programming, yeah, to, to make a, a program for the. AI I had to uh, I have to fill in the algorithm with my keyboard, so my teacher taught me how to.

✓ I thought it was about programming, like making a program for AI. I had to fill in the algorithm with my keyboard, so my teacher taught me how to do it.

Remove filler and correct sentence fragments. Use 'making a program for AI' and complete the clause 'taught me how to do it.' Fix articles and sentence structure. Classified as incorrect use of articles and sentence structure errors.

× I'm not, I, I'm still not good at typing though.

✓ I'm still not good at typing, though.

Remove redundant pronouns; sentence should be concise. 'Good at typing' correctly uses verb + -ing form; main issue was redundancy and punctuation.

× I practiced it by using typing practicing app uh, which is given by uh, teacher of my junior high.

✓ I practiced by using a typing practice app that was provided by my junior high teacher.

Use 'a' before 'typing practice app'; 'typing practicing' is incorrect—use 'typing practice.' Use passive 'provided by' or 'that my teacher gave.' Fix article and noun phrase.

× And the up was umm, in up, up was including like uh. Shooting game.

✓ The app included a shooting game.

Original has fragmented structure and incorrect 'up' for 'app.' Use simple past 'included' to describe past app features. Classified under present participle form because 'including' was misused; 'included' is correct here.

× So what I mean is like there's a word pop up and if I type it correctly, uh, I can get points.

✓ What I mean is that a word pops up, and if I type it correctly, I get points.

Use 'a word pops up' (present simple for general feature) and 'I get points' or 'I can get points'—choose consistent tense. Replace filler 'like' and fix clause connector 'is that.' Classified as sentence structure errors and subject-verb agreement.