打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接、流畅并避免重复和语气词。开头先给出明确观点，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，句子不超过五句，注意时态和语法（例如 use 'I always wrote' 或 'I always handwrite' 而不是 'I always handwriting'）。可以用连接词如 'because' 或 'because of' 来衔接原因。

示例: I prefer handwriting. During my school years I always handwrote my homework, so it became a habit. Because writing by hand helps me remember information better, I still use notebooks for study and planning.

建议: 回答要自然并直接说明选择（desktop 或 laptop），避免奇怪短语如 'in my personality' 和重复的语气词。提供具体原因并使用连接词（for example, because, so）来让回答更连贯。注意语法，如 'easy to carry around' 比 'convenient to move every everywhere' 更准确。

示例: I usually use a laptop keyboard because it's portable and lightweight. At university I often move between classrooms and the library, so a laptop is much easier to carry than a desktop.

建议: 回答应更简洁明确，先给出时间点（e.g. in primary school），然后说明原因或情景。避免重复和不完整的句子，注意时态（use 'learned' not 'learn'). 用连接词如 'because' 或 'when' 来组织信息。

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. Back then computer skills were part of the curriculum, so we had lessons to practise typing and earn a basic computer certificate.

建议: 回答要具体说明方法，使用清晰的动词结构，例如 'I improve my typing by...'，并说明频率和效果。避免重复短语和语法错误，句子应简短且连贯。可以举例说明练习方式（online exercises, typing tests, copying passages）。

示例: I improve my typing by taking online typing lessons and practising regularly. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day doing typing drills and also type my lecture notes quickly to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because, you know, in my, uh, school life, I always handwriting with my homework.

✓ I prefer handwriting because, you know, in my school life, I always handwrite my homework.

句中原用法“handwriting”是名词，但在此处需要动词形式表示“写作业”（我总是写作业），因此应使用动词“handwrite”。建议：当表达“做某动作”时，用动词形式（或动词短语），不是名词。

× It's like a habit in my life.

✓ It's like a habit for me.

原句结构虽能被理解，但“in my life”在此语境不如“for me”自然，更符合英语表达习惯。建议：描述个人习惯时用“a habit for me”或“a habit of mine”。

× Umm, in my personality, the laptop keyboard is more convenient for me.

✓ Umm, in my opinion, the laptop keyboard is more convenient for me.

“in my personality”用法错误，应使用表示观点的短语“in my opinion”或“I personally think”。建议：表示看法用“in my opinion/Personally/ I think”等。

× Uh, because in my university, the laptop keyboard is so convenient to move every everywhere.

✓ Uh, because at my university, the laptop keyboard is so convenient to move everywhere.

介词应为“at my university”而不是“in my university”。此外“every everywhere”重复且错误，应为“everywhere”。建议：地点用“at + institution”；避免重复词。

× Well, that's a long time ago. I remember that. It's in my primary school. I learn how to type on a keyboard because in that time the how to use computer is our license is our license, so I must learn it.

✓ Well, that's a long time ago. I remember it was in primary school. I learned how to type on a keyboard because at that time learning to use a computer was part of our course, so I had to learn it.

此处叙述过去发生的事情，应使用过去时。原句使用现在时“learn”不正确。另有冗余和表达混乱（“the how to use computer is our license is our license”），应改为清晰的短语。建议：回忆过去的事情时统一使用过去时（learn→learned，must→had to）；简化表达。

× I usually improve my typing through through to write the notes because the notes is not only the simple words and also have a different have different speed in writing notes.

✓ I usually improve my typing by writing notes because the notes are not only simple words and also involve different speeds of writing.

“improve my typing through to write”结构错误，应用“by + -ing”表示通过某种方式。名词“notes”是复数，谓语应为“are”。“have different speed”语序与搭配不当，改为“involve different speeds of writing”。建议：用“by + 动名词”表示方式，注意主谓一致并用更自然的搭配。