打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and avoid fillers (uh, umm). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and finish with a brief comparative comment.

示例: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I write in my journal it feels relaxing and helps me think more clearly. In contrast, typing on a device often feels more distracting because of notifications.

建议: Correct small mistakes (e.g., 'type' not 'tie') and reduce repetition. Give a clear topic sentence, then list two typical uses with a linking word to show organization.

示例: Yes, I type on my phone every day. For instance, I text friends and comment on social media, and I also send emails for school or work.

建议: Give a direct answer with specific time and reason, avoid hesitations. Use one linking word to add detail about purpose or context.

示例: I learned to type at about 13 years old. I started using a computer at school, where typing lessons helped me complete assignments and school projects more efficiently.

建议: Avoid vague claims and give specific improvement strategies. State your view briefly, then mention concrete methods you use or could use to get better, using linking words to structure the answer.

示例: I think practice helps improve typing, but I still use concrete methods. For example, I practice with online typing exercises and set aside 10 minutes daily to do timed drills; this improves my speed and accuracy over time.

× I do tie with my phone daily, umm, which has a digital keyboard, uh, so I type daily like text, text to friends or umm, I use it when I write comments online or send emails etcetera.

✓ I do type on my phone daily, which has a digital keyboard, so I type daily, like texting friends, writing comments online, or sending emails.

The original uses 'tie' (typo) instead of the verb 'type' and uses 'text' as a noun where the gerund 'texting' is more natural for activities. This is a present participle/verb form issue: use 'type' (base form after auxiliary 'do') and 'texting' for the activity. Also clarify the list with parallel gerund forms (texting, writing, sending). Suggestion: check for typos and maintain parallel verb forms when listing activities.

× So my first exposure to digital devices, uh, was at the age of 13. Umm, I've learned how to use the computer and how to type properly, uh, on a keyboard, uh, and that was for, umm, educational reasons, uh, to finish projects, school projects and.

✓ My first exposure to digital devices was at the age of 13. I learned how to use the computer and how to type properly on a keyboard, and that was for educational reasons, to finish school projects.

The original mixes past simple ('was') with present perfect ('I've learned') in a context referring to a specific past time (age 13). When referring to a finished past action at a specific time, use past simple ('I learned') rather than present perfect. Also remove redundant words and complete the final phrase. Suggestion: Use past simple for actions tied to a specific past time and keep sentences concise.

× At this point I don't think I'd need any improvement honestly because it's something that happens naturally, it's just a matter of time.

✓ At this point I don't think I need any improvement honestly, because it's something that comes naturally; it's just a matter of time.

The original uses 'I'd need' (conditional) which conflicts with the present context 'At this point'. Use present simple 'I don't think I need' to state a current opinion. Also 'happens naturally' is acceptable but 'comes naturally' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: Match verb mood to the speaker's intention (opinion vs hypothetical).

× The more you use a digital device or the more you use attach the screen on the phone so it will slowly improve and then unconsciously you'll find yourself typing.

✓ The more you use a digital device or the more you use the touchscreen on your phone, the more it will slowly improve, and eventually you'll find yourself typing unconsciously.

The original has an ungrammatical phrase 'use attach the screen' and awkward clause structure. This involves verb+ -ing and noun form issues: use 'touchscreen' or 'the touchscreen' and keep parallel comparative structure ('The more..., the more...'). Also place adverbs ('unconsciously' or 'eventually') in a natural position. Suggestion: Use correct nouns for device parts and maintain the 'the more... the more...' pattern for comparisons.