打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and correct mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Fix grammar (remove duplicated word, correct word order).

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me develop a distinctive writing style. For example, when I take study notes on paper, I remember information better, so I often review my handwritten notes before exams.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence, correct small errors, and use one linking word to add a specific reason or example. Use correct nouns (e.g., 'cafe' instead of 'Cathay' if meant) and avoid unnecessary repetition.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a desktop. Moreover, a laptop is lighter and more portable, so I can take it to a cafe or campus when I study.

建议: Start with a clear time marker, correct plural and word choice errors, and add one specific detail about what you learned. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school because the school required basic computer skills. For instance, the teacher taught touch-typing techniques and gave regular practice exercises to build speed.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence describing your routine, correct grammar and word choice, and include one specific measurable detail or resource. Use linking words for coherence and finish the sentence fully.

示例: I improve my typing by practising for about 20 minutes every day. As a result, I build muscle memory and increase speed and accuracy, and I also use online typing tests to track my progress.

× I prefer writing by hand because it helps me develop develop my own style.

✓ I prefer writing by hand because it helps me develop my own style.

Duplicate word 'develop' is a typo, not a grammar rule, but it affects fluency. Remove the extra word. Use 'develop' (base form) after 'helps me' + base verb to indicate the result. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words.

× Also, when I take notes on paper, I tend to remember information handwriting for study notes and personal.

✓ Also, when I take notes on paper, I tend to remember information in handwriting for study notes and personal use.

The phrase 'handwriting' was placed incorrectly and lacked a preposition. Use the preposition 'in' before 'handwriting' to indicate the form in which information is remembered. Add 'use' after 'personal' to complete the noun phrase.

× I type on lap a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop.

The word order 'on lap a laptop' is incorrect. Use the preposition 'on' with the phrase 'a laptop keyboard' and place the article 'a' before 'laptop'. Correct word order: 'on a laptop keyboard'.

× A laptop is much lighter and more flexible so I can easily take it to Cathay or to campus when I study.

✓ A laptop is much lighter and more portable, so I can easily take it to Cathay or to campus when I study.

'Flexible' describes physical flexibility or adaptability and is less natural here; 'portable' better describes a device that is easy to carry. Add a comma before 'so' when joining two independent clauses. This improves clarity and word choice.

× I learned to type when I was a primary student because the school required us to develop computer skills.

✓ I learned to type when I was a primary student because the school required us to develop computer skills.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. Explanation: 'learned' and 'required' properly align in past tense. Keep as is.

× The teacher showed me some typing secret and practice exercise.

✓ The teacher showed me some typing secrets and practice exercises.

Nouns 'secret' and 'exercise' need plural forms to match 'some', which implies more than one item. Use plural 'secrets' and 'exercises' for grammatical agreement and natural phrasing.

× I pressed tips typing every day around 20 minutes.

✓ I practice typing every day for around 20 minutes.

'Pressed tips typing' is incorrect. Use the verb 'practice' with the -ing form 'typing' to express regular activity: 'practice typing'. Use the preposition 'for' to indicate duration: 'for around 20 minutes'.

× Regular training helps me build a muscle memory so I become faster and more accurate over time.

✓ Regular training helps me build muscle memory so I become faster and more accurate over time.

The phrase 'a muscle memory' is unnatural; 'muscle memory' is an uncountable noun and does not need the article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the noun usage. Other verbs agree correctly with the subject.

× I also use the online typing exercise to track my.

✓ I also use online typing exercises to track my progress.

The sentence is incomplete and uses singular 'exercise' with 'the' unnecessarily. Replace with plural 'exercises' or keep singular with 'the' and add the missing object. Add 'progress' as the object of 'track' to complete the meaning. Remove 'the' before 'online' unless specifying a particular site.