打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers and repeated words, and give one brief reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases like “more com more flexible” with clear vocabulary.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more flexible. For example, I can edit documents easily and share them online, which saves time and effort.

建议: Use present tense consistently and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason and a brief supporting detail with a linking word such as “because” or “so”.

示例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my office provides desktop computers. As a result, most of my work and documents are created and stored on those machines.

建议: Avoid fillers and improve grammar and cohesion. Begin with a clear time reference, use correct tense and article use, and link actions logically.

示例: I learned to type when I was in fourth grade. At school we had a computers class and the teacher took us to the computer lab, where I started learning typing skills.

建议: Be specific and organized. Give one clear method, explain how you do it with a linking word, and avoid repetitive phrases. Mention measurable or concrete activities.

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type my school and work projects every day and use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy, which has reduced my errors over time.

× Yeah, I like to do typing because it's easier and more com more flexible.

✓ Yeah, I like typing because it's easier and more flexible.

The phrase 'do typing' is unnatural; 'typing' as a verb or gerund is sufficient. 'com more' is a typo and redundant. Use 'more flexible' or simply 'flexible'. Suggestion: say 'I like typing because it's easier and more flexible.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× Like for everyday routine I used to type on the desktops because in our office they're all desktops so I used to do work on desktop.

✓ For my everyday routine I used to type on desktops because in our office they are all desktops, so I used to do my work on a desktop.

Unnecessary 'the' before 'everyday routine' and inconsistent article use with 'desktop/desktops.' Use 'desktops' plural when referring to many, and 'a desktop' when referring to doing work on a single machine. 'Do work on desktop' needs article. Suggestion: 'For my everyday routine I used to type on desktops because in our office they are all desktops, so I used to do my work on a desktop.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Like for everyday routine I used to type on the desktops because in our office they're all desktops so I used to do work on desktop.

✓ For my everyday routine I used to type on desktops because in our office they were all desktops, so I used to do my work on a desktop.

When describing a past habitual situation, maintain past tense consistently. 'They're' (they are) is present; change to 'they were.' Suggestion: ensure all verbs match past habitual 'used to.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 5},{