打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise, correct grammar, and give one clear reason plus a brief example. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repetition. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing because it is much faster than handwriting. For example, when I take notes in lectures I can type quickly and organize information more easily, so I don't miss important points.

建议: Give a direct answer first (phone), briefly explain why and provide a specific context. Avoid saying you don't know common words; instead ask politely if needed. Use linking words like because and for example.

示例: I usually type on my phone every day because it is always with me. For example, I message my friends, email my boss, and chat with teachers using my phone while commuting.

建议: Provide a clear time frame and expand slightly with a supporting detail. Use a topic sentence and a follow-up sentence with a linking word (since/when/after).

示例: I learned to type around the age of 12 when I got my first cell phone. Since then I practiced daily by texting and using social media, so my speed improved quickly.

建议: Clarify your method: state a specific practice and give a brief example or result. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, by, so) and avoid vague phrases.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, for example by chatting with friends and using typing apps. By doing short daily exercises I have increased my speed and made fewer mistakes.

× I think handwriting is you have to like spend so many time on your and typing is more quick than handwriting.

✓ I think handwriting requires you to spend a lot of time, and typing is quicker than handwriting.

Original sentence uses incorrect phrasing ('is you have to like spend so many time on your') and wrong comparative form ('more quick'). This fits 'Verb in the present participle form' because the verb phrase should be 'requires' rather than awkward 'is you have to'. Use 'spend' with 'a lot of time' (correct quantity expression) and comparative adjective 'quicker'. Suggestion: use simpler verb structures (subject + verb + object) and correct comparative forms.

× And if you are in urgent hand.

✓ And if you are in a hurry.

This fragment is ungrammatical and unclear ('urgent hand' is incorrect). It is a sentence structure error: use the idiom 'in a hurry' to express being rushed. Also add the indefinite article 'a' before 'hurry'.

× Sorry, I don't know what is desktop and I use my phone to type in every day to contact my friends, my family, my boss, my school teacher.

✓ Sorry, I don't know what a desktop is, and I use my phone to type every day to contact my friends, my family, my boss, and my school teacher.

Problems: word order in 'what is desktop' (should be 'what a desktop is') and unnecessary particle 'in' after 'type'. Also missing commas and 'and' before the last item in the list. This is an incorrect use/placement of pronouns and sentence structure. Suggestion: use correct question-to-statement word order and omit unnecessary particles.

× It depends on when I got a cell phone.

✓ It depends on when I got my cell phone.

The sentence mostly needs a possessive determiners: 'a cell phone' could be acceptable but 'my cell phone' is more natural referring to the student's experience. Tense 'depends' (present) with past 'got' is acceptable because dependence is general; label as present tense-related adjustment to possessive use. Suggestion: use appropriate possessive pronouns for clarity.

× I think this you don't mean to practice that and you just say tapping with your friends every day you will get improve.

✓ I think you don't need to practice specially; if you just text/tap with your friends every day, you will improve.

Multiple errors: unnecessary words ('this you don't mean to practice that'), incorrect verb form 'get improve' (should be 'improve'), and 'tapping' as a gerund is awkward here — 'text' or 'tap' can be used. This falls under verb + -ing and verb form errors. Suggestion: simplify the sentence: 'you don't need to practice specially' or 'you don't need special practice' and use 'you will improve' for correct future result.