打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and confident: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm), and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking phrase if adding a second point.

示例: I prefer typing on my computer because it lets me produce text much faster. In addition, I can use built-in spell-check and formatting tools, which help me edit more efficiently.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, remove hesitations, and give specific examples of tasks. Use a linking word to connect main idea and examples.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. For example, I write university assignments, prepare PowerPoint slides for work, and reply to emails.

建议: Clarify the timeline and use clearer grammar: state when you learned to type, avoid repetition and fillers, and show how you improved with specific actions and results.

示例: I learned to type after I enrolled at university. Before that I had little typing skill, but after regular practice and using online drills, my speed and accuracy improved significantly.

建议: Organize steps clearly and use linking words (first, then, finally). Be specific about the resources and the outcome (speed/accuracy).

示例: First, I learned the correct finger positions for touch typing. Then I practiced daily with online typing websites and drills, which steadily increased my speed and reduced errors.

× I prefer typing on my computer because I can write sentences more quickly and umm, I can use automatic spell correcting.

✓ I prefer typing on my computer because I can write sentences more quickly and I can use automatic spell correction.

The phrase 'automatic spell correcting' incorrectly uses the present participle 'correcting' where the noun 'correction' is required to describe a feature. Use the noun form 'spell correction' to refer to the functionality. Also remove filler 'umm' for clarity.

× I use it on my laptop keyboard every day for my assignment at my university or sometimes umm, preparing some presentation slide for my working.

✓ I use my laptop keyboard every day for my university assignments, and sometimes I prepare presentation slides for my work.

Several preposition and noun form errors: 'use it on my laptop keyboard' is awkward so 'use my laptop keyboard' is clearer; 'for my assignment at my university' should be plural 'assignments' and 'at' can be omitted; 'preparing some presentation slide for my working' mixes forms—use 'I prepare presentation slides' and 'for my work' rather than 'for my working.' Remove filler 'umm'.

× The words winner in in enrolled the university. Before that I didn't have any skill of typing, but umm, by practicing a lot I my secure typing improved gradually.

✓ I enrolled in the university after winning the scholarship. Before that I didn't have any typing skills, but by practicing a lot, my secure typing improved gradually.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'The words winner in in enrolled the university' has word order and missing prepositions; I inferred a plausible intended meaning and corrected to 'I enrolled in the university after winning the scholarship.' If that inference is wrong, replace with the intended phrase. Also 'skill of typing' should be 'typing skills' (plural) and 'I my secure typing' has an extra pronoun; corrected to 'my secure typing improved gradually.' Remove filler 'umm.'

× 1st I learned the correct position of fingers and then I used the website to for the practicing typing and repeat it a lot.

✓ First, I learned the correct finger positions and then I used a website to practice typing and repeated it a lot.

Several issues: '1st' should be written 'First'; 'the correct position of fingers' should be 'the correct finger positions'; 'used the website to for the practicing typing' has extra preposition and wrong form—use 'used a website to practice typing'; 'and repeat it a lot' should match past tense 'repeated it a lot' to keep consistent tense with 'learned' and 'used.'