打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two concise, specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it natural and limit to 1–3 sentences. Correct common errors (e.g., verb tense, articles) and avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to read. For example, when I type I can correct mistakes quickly and my writing looks neater, which saves time and effort.

建议: Start with a clear statement about which device you use, then give one brief reason. Use simple, accurate vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'use a laptop' not 'ride and laptop'). Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

示例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don’t have a desktop. It’s convenient to carry and I can work anywhere.

建议: Answer directly with a time reference if possible (e.g., 'When I was 12' or 'a few years ago'), then explain briefly how you learned. Use correct tense and clear phrasing; avoid vague or confusing expressions.

示例: I learned to type by myself a few years ago. I practiced regularly using online lessons and typing games, which helped me improve my speed.

建议: Give a clear method for improvement and one specific detail about how you practice (frequency, tools, or exercises). Use full grammatical sentences and linking words if adding details.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop for about 20 minutes every day. I use typing websites and exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× Uh, I prefer to type in because it was more faster than very firm, user friendly handwriting Is a difficult to write and it was very hard to my arm.

✓ Uh, I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting; handwriting is difficult and it makes my arm tired.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'type in' should be 'typing'; 'more faster' is redundant comparative; 'very firm, user friendly handwriting' is unclear and uses incorrect adjectives and punctuation; sentence fragments and capitalisation errors. Suggestions: use 'prefer typing' or 'prefer to type', use 'faster' (not 'more faster'), use clear adjective order and punctuation, replace 'it was very hard to my arm' with 'it makes my arm tired' to express cause and correct grammar.

× I always ride and laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop keyboard.

✓ I always use a laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop keyboard.

Errors: 'ride' is incorrect verb choice and 'and' is wrong conjunction; 'laptop keyboard' needs an article 'a'. Suggestions: use the verb 'use' for keyboards and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'.

× I learn by myself and I learning typing from the music.

✓ I learned by myself and I learned to type by practicing with music.

Errors: incorrect tense and verb forms: 'I learn by myself' should be past tense 'I learned' if referring to when you learned; 'I learning typing' is ungrammatical — needs auxiliary and infinitive/gerund form. Suggestions: use simple past 'learned' for completed action and say 'learned to type' or 'learned typing' and express method with 'by practicing with music'.

× By practicing the maybe typing in the laptop.

✓ By practicing, maybe typing on the laptop.

Errors: unnecessary article 'the', awkward word order 'the maybe typing', wrong preposition 'in' should be 'on' for 'laptop'. Suggestions: use 'by practicing' followed by a clarifying phrase; place adverb 'maybe' before the phrase it modifies, and use 'on the laptop'.