打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., "my hands do not get sore" rather than "swollen").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s much more efficient. For example, I can type quickly and edit my work easily, so I get less tired and my hands don’t feel sore after long sessions.

建议: Be precise about the time frame and use correct tense. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No or statement) and then give a clear reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "back when my school days."

示例: Yes, I usually typed on my laptop every day during school because I used it for assignments and essays, so it became my main device for writing.

建议: Provide a concise answer with suitable tense and one specific detail to make the response more concrete. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid contractions in formal test settings if possible.

示例: I can’t remember the exact year, but I learned to type when I was a child; in fact, my cousins taught me basic typing games and we practised together at home.

建议: Give a more structured answer with a topic sentence and specific methods. Use linking words to list examples and avoid repeating similar ideas. Mention any deliberate practice or tools if applicable.

示例: I improve my typing by practising daily: for instance, I type messages and complete essays, and I also use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing over handwriting because it is more efficient and my hands does not get swollen and I do not get easily tired when I type.

✓ I prefer typing over handwriting because it is more efficient, my hands do not get swollen, and I do not get tired easily when I type.

The original sentence contains subject-verb agreement errors and awkward adverb placement. 'My hands' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' not 'does' (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Get easily tired' has adverb placement issues; 'tired easily' is more natural (Grammar problem type ID 20). Also add commas to separate clauses for clarity (Grammar problem type ID 26). Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and place adverbs close to the words they modify by saying 'do not get tired easily'.

× Back when my school days, I usually type on my laptop every day because I do my assignments and my essays.

✓ Back in my school days, I usually typed on my laptop every day because I did my assignments and essays.

This sentence has incorrect time expression and tense use. 'Back when my school days' is ungrammatical; use 'Back in my school days' (Grammar problem type ID 26). The context refers to the past, so verbs should be past tense: 'usually typed' and 'did' (Grammar problem type ID 5). Also 'my assignments and my essays' is repetitive; 'assignments and essays' is concise (Grammar problem type ID 13). Suggestion: match time expressions with past tense verbs and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I don't really remember when I've learned how to type on a keyboard, but I think I learned with my cousins back when we were young.

✓ I don't really remember when I learned how to type on a keyboard, but I think I learned with my cousins when we were young.

The original mixes present perfect with a past time expression. 'When' plus a specific past time requires simple past 'learned' rather than present perfect 'I've learned' (Grammar problem type ID 5). Also 'back when we were young' is wordy; 'when we were young' is clearer. Suggestion: use simple past for past events with a definite time reference.

× I improve my typing by simply typing on a keyboard every day, like when I message my friends, when I do my essays, my assignments.

✓ I improve my typing by simply typing on a keyboard every day, for example when I message my friends or do my essays and assignments.

The sentence has awkward listing and adverb/preposition use. 'Like when' is informal and redundant; 'for example when' is clearer (Grammar problem type ID 26). Also 'when I do my essays, my assignments' is disordered; combine with 'or do my essays and assignments' (Grammar problem type ID 20 and 13). Suggestion: use 'for example' to introduce instances and list activities in parallel form with correct conjunctions.