打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence ("I prefer typing") and give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fillers (umm) and repetition. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "more convenient," "faster").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents easily and store my coursework digitally, which saves time and helps me stay organized.

建议: Answer directly which device you use (desktop or laptop) and give specific contexts and one clear reason. Use complete sentences and correct prepositions (e.g., "in meetings"). Avoid fragmented phrases and finish your ideas. Use linking words like "especially" or "because" to connect details.

示例: I type on a laptop most days because it is portable and convenient. Especially during meetings, I can take notes quickly and edit attendance records on the spot.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and simplify your sentence structure. Use past tense correctly ("learned" not "has implemented") and avoid repetition. Mention one specific detail about the course to show depth. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I learned to type in secondary school when the school introduced a computer science course. The course taught touch-typing and basic computer skills, which made me comfortable using a keyboard.

建议: Give a clear method and one or two specific resources or techniques. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I recommend using") and explain briefly how the method helps (speed/accuracy). Use linking words like "for example" or "also" and keep it concise.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing platforms such as TypingClub and Keybr.com. For example, daily 20-minute exercises and timed tests have increased my speed and accuracy over a few months.

× Well, personally I tend to typing.

✓ Well, personally I tend to type.

The verb 'tend' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to' + base verb, not 'to' + gerund. Use 'tend to type' instead of 'tend to typing'. Suggestion: Use 'tend to' + base verb for habitual actions (e.g., 'I tend to type').

× It is umm, consistent routine.

✓ It is, umm, a consistent routine.

A singular countable noun 'routine' requires an article. The sentence also benefits from commas around the filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Add the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns and punctuate fillers with commas.

× We practice our work and complete our coursework daily.

✓ We practice work and complete our coursework daily.

'Our work' is acceptable but redundant here; more important is tense: present simple is correct for habitual actions. Minor style change: omit 'our' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines (e.g., 'We practice work and complete our coursework daily').

× It is more frequent.

✓ This happens more frequently.

'Frequent' is an adjective; the context requires the adverb 'frequently' to modify the verb 'happens'. Also 'It' is vague; use 'This' or specify the subject. Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs (frequently) and choose a clearer subject.

× We can use typing way to complete our work.

✓ We can use typing to complete our work.

The phrase 'typing way' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'typing' or the phrase 'the typing method' or 'the typing mode'. Also 'use X to do Y' is correct structure. Suggestion: Use 'use typing' or 'use the typing method' to express means.

× That's more time, convenience and efficient.

✓ That's more convenient, efficient, and time-saving.

The original mixes nouns and adjectives incorrectly. Use parallel adjective forms and a compound adjective 'time-saving' to express saving time. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure when listing qualities (adjective, adjective, adjective).

× 'Cause I do it is convenient way.

✓ 'Cause I do it, it is a convenient way.

The original is missing punctuation and an article; 'way' is a countable noun and needs 'a'. Also repetition of 'it' is awkward; better: 'Because it is convenient.' Suggestion: Use full form 'Because' and correct article: 'Because it is a convenient way.' Or simpler: 'Because it is convenient.'

× I am stick with typing daily for some business occasions, especially in during meetings.

✓ I stick with typing daily for some business occasions, especially during meetings.

'Am stick' is incorrect verb form; use simple present 'I stick with'. Remove redundant preposition 'in' before 'during'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and avoid redundant prepositions: 'I stick with typing... especially during meetings.'

× Typing on laptop is a more efficient way.

✓ Typing on a laptop is a more efficient way.

Countable noun 'laptop' requires an article 'a'. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns: 'a laptop'.

× I can put all my notes and edit the attendance notes of the.

✓ I can put all my notes together and edit the attendance notes.

The original ends with an incomplete phrase 'of the.' Remove the fragment and clarify the actions. 'Put notes together' is a natural phrase. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments and complete the object of prepositions.

× Well, when I was in secondary school, our campus has implemented the specific computer science course allow allowing all students to study how to type on laptops.

✓ Well, when I was in secondary school, our campus implemented a specific computer science course allowing all students to learn how to type on laptops.

Mixing past time reference 'when I was' with present perfect 'has implemented' is incorrect; use simple past 'implemented'. 'Allow allowing' is duplicated; use 'allowing' or rephrase. Use 'learn how to type' rather than 'study how to type'. Suggestion: Match past time expressions with simple past and remove duplicated words.

× It is an advanced course to help students know computer science.

✓ It was an advanced course to help students learn about computer science.

Past time reference 'when I was' requires 'was' not 'is'. 'Help students know computer science' is unnatural; use 'learn about' or 'learn'. Suggestion: Use appropriate verb (was) and more natural collocation 'learn about'.

× Well, personally I would like to recommend you to use some online typing games and timely sections.

✓ Well, personally I would like to recommend that you use some online typing games and timed sessions.

Recommend takes a clause 'recommend that you do something' or 'recommend doing something'; do not use 'recommend you to'. 'Timely sections' is incorrect; likely 'timed sessions' is intended. Suggestion: Use 'recommend that you' + base verb, and choose correct noun phrase 'timed sessions'.

× These kinds of practice are obviously can improve your typing skill, including your speed and accuracy and you can practice them regularly.

✓ These kinds of practice can obviously improve your typing skills, including your speed and accuracy, and you can practice them regularly.

'These kinds of practice are obviously can' contains extra auxiliary 'are' and misplaced adverb. 'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills' for general ability. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct auxiliary verbs and pluralize general skill nouns: 'can obviously improve your typing skills'.