打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, avoid contradicting phrases (you said prefer typing then chose handwriting) and reduce fillers like 'uh'. Give one or two concise reasons with specific details and use linking words (because, so, therefore).

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I find writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take lecture notes on paper I can easily draw diagrams and highlight key points, so I retain new material more effectively.

建议: Begin with a clear short answer (desktop). Then give one clear reason and add a brief supporting detail using a linking word (because, since). Avoid repetition of words (desktop).

示例: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I bought a desktop computer first and it meets my needs. Since laptops are expensive where I live, I have continued using the desktop for work and study.

建议: Give a precise time reference and a concise explanation. Remove hesitations and unnecessary phrases. Use linking words to make sequence clear (about, during, since).

示例: I started learning to type about five years ago when I bought a desktop computer to do remote work during the COVID-19 pandemic. Since then I have practiced regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: Good clear answer. To improve further, add a specific routine or method and an example of progress to make it more concrete. Use linking words to organize ideas (for example, by, such as).

示例: I improve my typing by practising for 20 minutes every morning using online lessons and drills. For example, I use typing.com for structured lessons and take timed tests weekly to track improvements in speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I am not an IT student so I used to write everything whatever I listen or uh learn on the paper.

✓ I prefer typing because I am not an IT student, so I used to write everything I hear or learn on paper.

The original sentence has issues with countable/uncountable nouns and plural forms: 'on the paper' is unnatural; use 'on paper' (uncountable). 'whatever I listen' is incorrect verb choice and form; use 'everything I hear' to match present habitual meaning. Also remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'paper' and streamline clause connectors.

× So it made me to choose a handwriting over a computer typing.

✓ So it led me to choose handwriting over computer typing.

'Made me to choose' is incorrect; after 'make' the bare infinitive is used ('make me choose') or better 'led me to choose'. 'a handwriting' and 'a computer typing' are incorrect noun forms; use uncountable nouns 'handwriting' and 'computer typing'. The sentence structure is improved by removing articles and using the correct verb form.

× I type on desktop, desktop keyboard because when I bought the computer and desktop came along with it and I started using it.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard because when I bought the computer the desktop came with it and I started using it.

Missing article 'a' before 'desktop keyboard' and awkward phrase 'desktop came along with it'; correct preposition is 'came with it'. Also remove repeated 'desktop' and add 'the' before 'desktop' for clarity. This fixes preposition and article usage.

× And I am not into laptops because laptops are quite costly in my country.

✓ I am not into laptops because they are quite costly in my country.

Repeating 'laptops' is acceptable but using the pronoun 'they' avoids redundancy and is more natural. This fixes pronoun usage by replacing repetition with an appropriate pronoun referring back to laptops.

× I landed, uh, five years ago, I can say, uh, I bought my desktop, uh, to do a remote job, uh, during the COVID time.

✓ About five years ago I bought my desktop to do a remote job during COVID.

'I landed' is incorrect contextually; 'about five years ago' expresses time. Verb 'bought' is correct past tense but sentence is wordy and 'during the COVID time' is unnatural; use 'during COVID' or 'during the COVID-19 pandemic'. Clean up filler words and order for natural past-tense narration.

× And it's, uh, from that time I started improving my typing skills.

✓ Since then I have been improving my typing skills.

Original mixes present 'it's' with past 'started'. Use present perfect continuous 'have been improving' to show an action that began in the past and continues to the present. 'Since then' correctly links the start time to ongoing action.

× I improve my typing by regularly practicing it, and there are also websites that I use very often to improve my typing skills, such as typing.com.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly, and I often use websites such as typing.com to improve my skills.

'Regularly practicing it' is awkward; place adverb properly as 'practicing regularly'. Avoid redundant 'improve my typing skills' twice by restructuring. This corrects placement of -ing form and adverb placement for clarity.