打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more fluent and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers and unclear tense, and give one specific reason with a brief example. Keep it under 4-5 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing with a pen helps me remember information better. For example, when I take class notes by hand I can recall facts more easily later, so I often choose a notebook during lectures.

建议: Answer directly and reduce repetition and hesitation. Use one clear sentence stating which device you use, then add a concise supporting detail with a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop to prepare lessons and do schoolwork. As a result, typing quickly on a laptop helps me finish assignments faster.

建议: Give a clear time reference and avoid negative phrasing like 'I cannot remember' as the main answer. Start with a direct time sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (e.g., where or how you learned) using linking words.

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in middle school. At that time we had computer classes, so I practiced typing both Korean and English during lessons and at home.

建议: Be more specific about methods and avoid short fragmented sentences and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and then give 2–3 concrete techniques or resources (e.g., online exercises, daily drills, posture) with linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing tutors for 15 minutes every day and practice accuracy with timed drills; I also focus on correct finger placement to increase speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer uh, actually handwriting because I feel like when I was some write something with my pen or pencil.

✓ I actually prefer handwriting because I feel like when I write something with my pen or pencil, it feels better.

The original sentence has a broken structure and incorrect word order ('when I was some write'). This is a sentence structure error: the clause should use the present tense 'write' not 'was write' and the phrase 'some write' is ungrammatical. Also remove filler words and reorder for clarity: place 'actually' before 'prefer' and make the dependent clause 'when I write something with my pen or pencil'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct verb form 'write' for a habitual present action.

× Umm, I type, I type on laptop keyword every day because when I when I work at school, I usually use laptop for typing, uh, for preparation my class, umm, it'll be very helpful.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because when I work at school, I usually use a laptop to type and prepare for my class; it's very helpful.

Problems include missing articles ('a laptop keyboard', 'a laptop'), wrong noun choice ('keyword' should be 'keyboard'), and incorrect phrase order ('for preparation my class'). These are article errors and word choice errors. Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and correct collocations: 'use a laptop to type' and 'prepare for my class'. Also combine clauses for fluency.

× Umm, I cannot remember what exactly I learn when I learn how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I cannot remember exactly when I learned how to type on a keyboard.

This is a sentence structure and tense problem: the original repeats 'learn' incorrectly and uses present tense where past is required. The event of learning happened in the past, so use past tense 'learned', and place 'exactly' before the time clause for natural word order.

× Umm but the after when I when I was a middle school students, uh, I can type on keyboard in Korean and English.

✓ But after that, when I was a middle school student, I could type on a keyboard in Korean and English.

Several tense and number issues: 'students' should be singular 'student' and ability in the past should be 'could' rather than 'can'. Also insert articles ('a keyboard') and correct the time phrase 'after that'. This fixes present vs past and singular/plural agreement.

× MMM, the most important thing to improve my typing is practicing. A lot. Many times. I mean, uh, because MMM, practicing is perfect for, umm, mastering something. So whenever you have trouble typing and you need to practice for that.

✓ The most important thing to improve my typing is practice; you need to practice a lot. Practicing is essential to master a skill, so whenever you have trouble typing, you should practice.

Using 'practicing' as a noun is acceptable, but the original fragments and repetition are awkward. This entry corrects verb form usage and sentence fragments: use the noun 'practice' or the gerund 'practicing' consistently, avoid sentence fragments ('A lot. Many times.'), and use 'should' to advise practice. Also change 'perfect for mastering something' to 'essential to master a skill' for natural collocation.