打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a specific example. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases like "didn't go to in my brand." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example."

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take lecture notes by hand, I find it easier to recall key points later, whereas typing on my phone feels more distracting.

建议: Answer directly and organize reasons. Use one topic sentence, then add detail with a linking phrase. Reduce repetition and improve grammar (e.g., "it is general" → "it's common").

示例: Yes, I usually type on a laptop or phone because most class materials are online. However, if I have free time, I prefer handwriting my notes since it helps me study more effectively.

建议: Give a clear time reference and one specific detail. Correct grammar (e.g., "a long time ago," "elementary school," "computer lessons"). Use a linking word like "so" or "and" to connect ideas.

示例: I learned to type a long time ago in elementary school. We had regular computer lessons, so we practiced typing both English and Chinese during each class.

建议: Be confident and precise. Start with a direct statement about your methods, then give one or two specific practices. Avoid repetition and filler words.

示例: I'm not sure I'm very fast yet, but I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I use online typing exercises for 15 minutes and type my lecture notes on the laptop to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because it can make me remember the things easily if I, uh, type on the phone or computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better than when I type on my phone or computer.

Original sentence mixes conditional 'if' with a general preference and uses awkward phrasing 'can make me remember the things easily'. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Replace 'can make me remember the things easily if I ... type' with a clear comparative structure: 'helps me remember things better than when I type'. Use 'my phone or computer' for clarity and remove unnecessary filler.

× I think the thing I type didn't go to in my brand, so I think it gets easily too.

✓ I think what I type doesn't stick in my brain, so I forget it easily.

Sentence has incorrect pronouns and word forms: 'the thing I type' and 'didn't go to in my brand' are incorrect. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and idiomatic expressions. Use 'what I type' and the correct noun 'brain' and present tense 'doesn't stick' for a general truth. 'Forget it easily' is the natural phrasing.

× Yes, because I am the student now, so it is general to use a phone or laptop to type the notes.

✓ Yes, because I am a student now, so it is common to use a phone or laptop to type notes.

Problems: article use and word choice. 'the student' is incorrect; use 'a student'. 'It is general' is unnatural — use 'it is common'. Also 'type the notes' should be 'type notes' (no definite article). This combines article errors and incorrect adjective/adverb use; corrected under third person singular ID per list requirement.

× But in fact if I have time I prefer to handwriting.

✓ But in fact, if I have time I prefer to handwrite.

'Prefer to handwriting' incorrectly uses a noun/gerund after 'prefer to'. Use the base verb 'handwrite' or the gerund without 'to' ('prefer handwriting'). This is a verb form error; change to 'prefer to handwrite' to match structure.

× I think it is long time ago when I was the elementary school.

✓ I think it was a long time ago when I was in elementary school.

Original mixes present 'is' with past context and omits preposition 'in'. Use past tense 'was' and include 'in' before 'elementary school'. Also add 'a' before 'long time' for correct idiom.

× I have the computer computer lessons and we need to type the English or Chinese every lesson.

✓ I had computer lessons and we had to type in English or Chinese every lesson.

Tense should be past ('had') because referring to school. Duplicate 'computer' is an error. Use no article before 'computer lessons' and use 'type in English or Chinese'. Also change 'need to' to past obligation 'had to' for consistency.

× In fact, I I didn't I didn't share sure that my typing is really good, but because I practice every day, so I think it is doing its practice.

✓ In fact, I'm not sure that my typing is very good, but because I practice every day, I think it is improving.

Original has repetition 'I I didn't I didn't', incorrect verb forms 'share sure', wrong clause order and awkward phrase 'doing its practice'. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Use 'I'm not sure' for doubt, 'very good' instead of 'really good' is acceptable but kept, and 'it is improving' correctly expresses progress due to practice.