打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific reason for each option using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors (e.g., articles and verb forms). Use varied vocabulary such as "note-taking," "journaling," and "convenient."

示例: I like both typing and handwriting. I usually type on my laptop for tasks that require speed and editing, such as emails or reports. However, I prefer handwriting in a paper diary because it helps me reflect and remember personal thoughts more clearly.

建议: Give a single clear answer first (desktop or laptop), then support it with one or two specific reasons and a linking word. Correct sentence structure and remove filler phrases. Use precise vocabulary like "portable," "comfortable," and "gaming setup."

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and lets me work anywhere. I do use a desktop keyboard occasionally for gaming because the larger monitor and mechanical keys make games more comfortable.

建议: Answer the question with a clear time reference (e.g., "when I was X years old" or "at school") and one specific detail about how you learned. Use correct past tense forms and link ideas logically. Avoid irrelevant statements like "I can use Internet."

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old, mostly from my older brother who showed me proper finger placement and basic shortcuts. After that I practised on simple typing programs to increase my speed and accuracy.

建议: Provide a clearer, specific method for improvement: mention practice techniques (typing lessons, online tests, touch-typing practice) and measurable goals (speed or accuracy). Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases like "Hard Rock keyboard" unless you explain it. Keep to two or three sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. I also use a keyboard with high-contrast key labels and do focused drills, such as timed paragraph typing and accuracy exercises, to reduce errors.

× I prefer both.

✓ I prefer both methods.

The sentence is short and grammatically possible but ambiguous; adding a noun clarifies what 'both' refers to. This fixes an article/noun omission by specifying 'methods'. Use a noun after 'both' to make the meaning clear.

× First of all, when I need something to write then I use my laptop.

✓ First of all, when I need to write something, I use my laptop.

The phrase 'need something to write' uses word order and an unnecessary pronoun awkwardly. Reordering to 'need to write something' corrects the infinitive structure and pronoun placement.

× On the other hand, if I write on a paper then definitely it is a very convenient for me because I can write my views on a diary.

✓ On the other hand, if I write on paper, it is definitely very convenient for me because I can write my views in a diary.

Use 'on paper' (no article) and 'in a diary' (correct preposition and article). Remove the extra 'then' and place 'definitely' before 'very' or simply 'definitely convenient'. This fixes article and preposition errors and word order.

× When I use on my daily basis, is it keyboard? Because it is very convenient for me, I can type anywhere and anytime.

✓ When I use a keyboard on a daily basis, it is very convenient for me because I can type anywhere and anytime.

Correct phrase is 'on a daily basis' and include the noun 'keyboard' in subject position. Remove the fragment 'is it keyboard?' and join sentences for clarity. This fixes incorrect word order and sentence structure.

× On the other hand, if I use a desktop to play some games so I feel more comfortable with it.

✓ On the other hand, if I use a desktop to play some games, I feel more comfortable with it.

Remove the unnecessary 'so' after the subordinate clause; use a comma before the main clause. This corrects sentence structure and conjunction use.

× Looking back, I did learn typing from my elder brother especially.

✓ Looking back, I learned to type from my elder brother, especially.

Use simple past 'learned' and the infinitive 'to type' rather than 'learn typing'. 'Did learn' is unnecessary emphatic past; replace with 'learned'. This fixes past tense and verb pattern.

× He is a tech savvy and I learn keyboard keys, how to use when we give space and so on.

✓ He is tech-savvy, and he taught me the keyboard keys, when to use the space bar, and so on.

'Tech-savvy' needs a hyphen and can be used without 'a' here or with 'a tech-savvy person'. Use past tense 'taught' to match learning in the past. Clarify 'when to use the space bar' for correct noun and verb patterns.

× I can use Internet on my laptop.

✓ I can use the Internet on my laptop.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'Internet' in this context. This fixes article and preposition usage.

× Well, I improve my typing with the Hard Rock keyboard because there are all keys visible and I can find very easily.

✓ Well, I improve my typing with the Hard Rock keyboard because all the keys are visible and I can find them very easily.

Correct word order is 'all the keys are visible' and include 'them' after 'find' for object clarity. This fixes article placement, word order, and missing object.

× So it is a very convenient for me to write any task.

✓ So it is very convenient for me to complete any task.

Remove the unnecessary article 'a' before 'very convenient' and use the verb 'complete' for 'write any task' to make sense. This fixes article error and improves verb choice.

× Apart from that I can write a living essay and type something paragraph.

✓ Apart from that, I can write a short essay and type a paragraph.

Phrases 'living essay' and 'type something paragraph' are unidiomatic. Replace with 'short essay' and 'type a paragraph' to correct word choice and sentence structure.