打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, however) và đưa thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào bạn dùng máy tính hay viết tay). Giữ độ dài không quá 4-5 câu và sửa ngữ pháp như động từ chia và giới từ.

示例: I prefer typing and handwriting depending on the situation. For example, when I work on my computer I usually type because it is faster and easier to edit. However, during class I prefer handwriting notes because it helps me remember information better.

建议: Bạn cần nói rõ ràng, tránh tiếng ấp úng và sửa lỗi phát âm/chính tả (tie → type). Nói cụ thể về tần suất và mục đích (ví dụ mỗi ngày một giờ để đọc/viết bài). Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý và hạn chế lặp từ 'uh'.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day. Typically I spend about an hour each day typing academic articles or assignments, because most of my study materials are digital.

建议: Trả lời nên rõ ràng với mốc thời gian cụ thể và câu trôi chảy. Tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc (learn how to type, in primary school, in an IT class). Thêm chi tiết ngắn về cách bạn học sẽ làm câu phong phú hơn.

示例: I learned to type a long time ago, when I was in primary school. It was part of our IT lessons, where we practiced typing accuracy and basic keyboard skills.

建议: Nên nêu phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (ví dụ: bài tập gõ tốc độ, phần mềm luyện gõ, luyện với bài viết cụ thể) và dùng thì phù hợp. Trình bày mạch lạc, dùng liên từ (for example, by practising) và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop every day. For example, I use online typing exercises to increase speed, and I also type academic articles regularly to improve accuracy and familiarity with specialised vocabulary.

× I should say and the typing or handwriting is depend on the time.

✓ I should say that typing or handwriting depends on the time.

The sentence misuses 'is depend' and lacks 'that' after 'say'. Use the verb 'depend' with subject 'typing or handwriting' in present simple: 'depends'. Add 'that' to introduce the clause. Suggestion: say 'I should say that typing or handwriting depends on the time.'

× When I walk with the computer I prefer to typing more than rather than writing.

✓ When I walk with the computer I prefer typing to writing.

Incorrect verb form 'to typing' and redundant comparative 'more than rather than'. After 'prefer' use the gerund without 'to' when contrasting two activities: 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer doing X rather than doing Y'. Suggestion: 'I prefer typing to writing.'

× And when I stay at class I prefer handwriting better than typing.

✓ When I am in class I prefer handwriting to typing.

Use 'am in class' for the state; 'stay at class' is idiomatic error. 'Prefer ... better than' is redundant—use 'prefer A to B'. Suggestion: 'When I am in class, I prefer handwriting to typing.'

× Uh, if you ask me, I should answer that, uh, I often tie on the laptop keyboard every day, uh, and one day I take roughly one hour to typing on the on the laptop at a time about the some, uh, academic article such.

✓ If you ask me, I often type on the laptop keyboard every day, and usually I spend roughly one hour typing academic articles on the laptop at a time.

Multiple errors: 'should answer that' is unnecessary; 'tie' should be 'type' (spelling); 'type' is base verb (not 'to typing'); time expression 'one day' is wrong—use 'usually' or 'at a time'; 'take roughly one hour' better as 'spend roughly one hour'; word order and extra words like 'the some' and 'such' are incorrect. Suggestion: 'I often type on the laptop keyboard every day, and usually I spend roughly one hour typing academic articles at a time.'

× MMM, it's so long time ago.

✓ Mm, it was a long time ago.

Use past tense 'was' with the time reference 'a long time ago'. Also include the article 'a' before 'long time'. Suggestion: 'It was a long time ago.'

× I guess it's worth, uh, when, when, when I was in the primary school, I, I knew how to write a accurate word, uh, how to type on the laptop by the information subject.

✓ I guess it was when I was in primary school that I learned how to type accurately on the laptop in my computer class.

Multiple errors: 'it's worth' is incorrect phrase; 'the primary school' should be 'primary school' without 'the'; use past tense 'learned' instead of 'knew how to'; 'a accurate' should be 'accurately' (adverb) or 'an accurate word' is odd; 'by the information subject' should be 'in my computer class' or 'in information technology class'. Suggestion: 'I learned how to type accurately on the laptop in my computer class when I was in primary school.'

× I input typing by practicing day by day on in the laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day on the laptop.

'Input typing' is incorrect; use 'improve my typing' or 'practice typing'. 'By practicing' is correct but 'day by day' is better as 'every day'. Remove extra 'in'. Suggestion: 'I improve my typing by practicing every day on the laptop.'

× You know I typing some academic articles or the master track literature subjects.

✓ I type some academic articles and materials for my master's literature subjects.

Use base verb 'type' for habitual action, not 'typing' without auxiliary. 'the master track literature subjects' is awkward; better 'master's literature subjects' or 'literature courses for my master's'. Suggestion: 'I type academic articles and materials for my master's literature courses.'