打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cách nói cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và các từ thừa. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No hoặc I prefer...), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồn như "uh". Ví dụ: nói "I prefer handwriting because..." rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (tốc độ, dễ nhớ, thói quen).

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and I feel more comfortable writing by hand. I haven't learned touch typing properly, so I find handwriting faster and less frustrating.

建议: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "it helps me remember key locations"). Tránh tiếng ồn như "you know" và "uh". Nên đưa 1-2 lý do ngắn gọn kết hợp linking word để mạch lạc (because, so).

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because its compact layout makes it easy to find the keys quickly. As a result, I remember the key positions better and can type more comfortably.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (e.g. "I learned... when I was in grade 3") và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự. Sửa ngữ pháp (thì quá khứ) và từ không phù hợp ("rude at PE" không đúng). Nên thêm một chi tiết ngắn về hoàn cảnh, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để diễn đạt lý do. Hạn chế câu quá dài lủng củng.

示例: I learned to use a keyboard when I was in grade 3. My mother enrolled me in a computer class because I was weak in some subjects, and that class taught me the basics of typing.

建议: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn: dùng cấu trúc ngắn, rõ ràng và dùng linking words (for example, such as). Loại bỏ cụm từ cồng kềnh ("by the route of") và tiếng ồn. Nên nêu cụ thể nguồn học (websites, apps) và cách luyện tập (practice exercises, typing tests).

示例: I improve my typing by watching online tutorial videos and using typing practice websites. For example, I use free apps that offer timed tests and exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I'm not so, but I believe that handwriting is my perfect choice.

✓ I'm not sure, but I believe that handwriting is my preferred choice.

The original sentence has incorrect phrasing 'I'm not so' which is ungrammatical; use 'I'm not sure' to express uncertainty. 'Perfect choice' is unusual here; 'preferred choice' or simply 'prefer handwriting' is more natural. Suggestion: Say 'I'm not sure, but I prefer handwriting.'

× You know, uh, I'm even even don't know how to type on the computer keyboard in correct way, so I just know how to write by hand.

✓ You know, uh, I don't even know how to type on a computer keyboard correctly, so I only know how to write by hand.

Errors: double 'even', wrong word order 'I'm even don't know', incorrect article use 'the computer keyboard', and incorrect adverb placement 'in correct way'. Use 'I don't even know' (negative inversion), 'a computer keyboard' or 'a keyboard', and adverb 'correctly' after the verb. Also 'only' is more natural than 'just' here. Suggestion: Practice negative inversion and adverb placement: 'I don't even know how to type on a keyboard correctly.'

× I use the laptop keyboard and you know, it's really, uh, convenient with the small size of keyboard and it's help me remember the location of it's put on perfectly.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard and it's really convenient because of its small size, and it helps me remember the positions of the keys perfectly.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard', incorrect preposition phrase 'convenient with the small size' should be 'convenient because of its small size', wrong possessive 'it's' (it is) used instead of 'its', wrong verb form 'help' should be 'helps', and awkward phrase 'location of it's put on' should be 'positions of the keys'. Suggestion: Use correct possessive 'its' and subject-verb agreement 'helps', and more precise nouns like 'keys' or 'positions'.

× If I remember vividly at that time I was in grade 3 and I'm not really rude at PE subjects so my mother give me to the class up using computer and that time I learned how to use the keyboard.

✓ If I remember vividly, I was in grade 3 at that time, and I wasn't very good at PE, so my mother enrolled me in a computer class, and that was when I learned how to use the keyboard.

Errors: tense inconsistencies and incorrect verbs: 'I'm not really rude at PE subjects' should be past 'I wasn't very good at PE'; 'my mother give me to the class up using computer' is ungrammatical—use 'my mother enrolled me in a computer class'. Also add commas for clarity and use past tense 'learned'. Suggestion: Keep past events in past tense and use correct verbs like 'enroll'->'enrolled'.

× Nowadays, by the route of, uh, technology and the widespread of Internet, I can easily find some videos that about how to type in the keyboard correctly and it's for me it's really convenient and useful.

✓ Nowadays, thanks to technology and the widespread use of the Internet, I can easily find videos about how to type on the keyboard correctly, which is really convenient and useful for me.

Errors: awkward phrase 'by the route of', wrong noun form 'the widespread of Internet' should be 'the widespread use of the Internet', incorrect relative clause 'videos that about', incorrect preposition 'in the keyboard' should be 'on the keyboard', and redundant 'it's for me it's'. Suggestion: Use natural connectors like 'thanks to', 'videos about', and proper prepositions 'type on the keyboard', and avoid redundancy.