打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer handwriting), then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., “I don’t like typing very much”).

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas with diagrams, which makes revision easier.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (desktop or laptop) and support it with a short, well-linked reason. Correct verb forms and remove unnecessary repetition. Use linking words like “usually” and “sometimes.”

示例: I usually type on my desktop for assignments because it has a full keyboard and a larger screen. Sometimes I use my laptop to write journals when I travel or work away from home.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and a brief description of how you learned. Use correct past tense and link ideas with words like “there” or “then.” Keep it concise.

示例: I learned to type when I was at school during computer classes. Back then the teacher taught basic typing skills, and after a few weeks of practice I became fairly comfortable with the keyboard.

建议: Start with a clear statement of method (I improve by practicing) and give one or two specific examples of practice. Use correct grammar (I improve, more and more practice) and linking words such as “for example” or “by.”

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I type college assignments and short stories every day, and I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Well, I mostly prefer the handwriting and it gives the real experience of writing and I don't like to typing more much.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer handwriting because it gives the real experience of writing, and I don't like typing very much.

This sentence has article errors and awkward phrasing. 'The handwriting' should be 'handwriting' (no article) when speaking generally. 'to typing' is incorrect; use the base verb 'typing' after 'like' (I don't like typing). 'more much' is ungrammatical; use 'very much.' Also improved sentences' flow by replacing 'and' with 'because' for causal clarity.

× I often type on my desktop for making assignments and sometimes I also making journals in in laptop also and that on that time I was I'm typing the most.

✓ I often type on my desktop to do assignments, and sometimes I also write journals on my laptop; at those times I type the most.

Multiple issues: 'for making assignments' is better as 'to do assignments' (use of preposition/infinitive). 'making journals' is awkward; use 'write journals.' Use 'on my laptop' (preposition) not 'in laptop.' Remove duplicated words. 'that on that time I was I'm typing the most' has tense and structure problems; corrected to 'at those times I type the most.' This keeps present habitual meaning.

× When I was in my school and I have also I had the computer classes on that time. Then I was learn about to typing and I I learned typing in several days.

✓ When I was in school, I had computer classes then, and I learned to type in a few days.

Mixed and incorrect tense forms: 'I have also I had' is redundant and incorrect—use simple past 'I had.' 'When I was in my school' should be 'When I was in school.' 'I was learn about to typing' is incorrect; use simple past 'I learned to type.' 'in several days' is better as 'in a few days.' Overall use simple past for past events.

× Well, I think that I I improving my typing by the practice and more to more practice I usually type the stories and assignments of my college and the hard practice give me the my typing mode.

✓ Well, I think that I improve my typing by practicing more; I usually type stories and college assignments, and hard practice has improved my typing.

Verb form errors: 'I I improving' should be 'I improve' or 'I am improving.' Because this describes a habitual action, use simple present 'I improve' or present continuous 'I am improving.' 'By the practice' should be 'by practicing' (gerund). 'More to more practice' is ungrammatical; use 'practicing more.' 'The hard practice give me the my typing mode' is unclear; corrected to 'hard practice has improved my typing' using present perfect to show effect on current ability.