打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid fillers (uh) and repetitive phrases.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I write notes by hand I tend to recall facts more easily later, and I also enjoy keeping a handwritten diary as a personal record.

建议: Answer directly and correct grammar: say which device you use most and give a brief reason or exception. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly, and avoid unclear phrases.

示例: I mostly use my phone to type because I chat with friends and family every day. However, I sometimes use a desktop to type lecture notes or to prepare for exams.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and describe briefly how you learned using correct tense and vocabulary. Remove fillers and fix verb forms (learned, taught).

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard in fifth grade during computer class. My teacher taught us basic typing techniques and we practiced using simple typing games to build speed.

建议: State clearly whether you do deliberate practice or improve incidentally. Give a specific method you use or could use to improve, and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I mostly improve my typing incidentally by using my phone and laptop daily, especially when texting family. To get better deliberately, I also plan to use an online typing tutor for 10 minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× With me, I like handwriting because, uh, I think handwriting can help me remember better.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting helps me remember better.

Replace 'With me, I like' with 'I prefer' to use natural phrasing; 'help me remember' is fine but use present simple 'helps' for habitual/general truth. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant second 'I think'. Use present simple for general ability.

× Moreover, I respect handwriting because I think it is a traditional way to keep diary and memories.

✓ Moreover, I value handwriting because I think it is a traditional way to keep a diary and memories.

Use 'value' or 'appreciate' instead of 'respect' when referring to an activity. Add the article 'a' before 'diary'. 'Keep a diary and memories' is clearer. Use present simple 'is' correctly.

× No, I almost use my phone to take set at chatting with my friends and family, but sometime I also use desktop to type my lecture or to when I have a exam.

✓ No, I usually use my phone to chat with my friends and family, but sometimes I also use my desktop to type my lectures or when I have an exam.

Replace 'almost' with 'usually' for frequency. 'to take set at chatting' is incorrect — use 'to chat'. Pluralize 'sometimes'. Add 'my' before 'desktop' and use 'lectures' or 'lecture notes' depending on meaning. Use 'an exam' with the article 'an'. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'when'.

× I learned to tie a keyboard when I was grade 5 and uh, in this age I have a computer class and uh, my teacher teach me some way to uh, basic keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade 5. At that age I had a computer class and my teacher taught me some basic keyboard skills.

Use 'type' not 'tie'. Include 'in' before 'grade 5'. Change present 'have' to past 'had' to match past time. Change 'teach' to past 'taught'. Use 'some basic keyboard skills' for natural phrasing. Remove fillers and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I don't have practice to improve my typing because when I type on my phone or laptop every day and I must text to my family on my phone every day so I can improve my skills.

✓ I don't need extra practice to improve my typing because I type on my phone or laptop every day, and I text my family every day, so I can improve my skills.

'Don't have practice' is unnatural here; use 'don't need extra practice' or 'don't practice separately'. Use present simple 'type' and 'text' for habitual actions. Remove 'to' after 'text'. Add commas to join clauses. Clarify cause and effect: daily typing and texting help improve skills.