打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "easier" not "more easier"), and avoid redundancy. Give one or two specific reasons and use a linking phrase. For example, mention convenience and legibility, and briefly contrast handwriting.

示例: I prefer typing because it’s easier and much neater than my handwriting. Also, I can type on a portable keyboard or my phone, which makes it more convenient when I’m on the move.

建议: Respond directly and correct grammar and clarity. Use a topic sentence stating which device you use, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid unclear phrases like "it had to write with my hand."

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because most of my tasks are digital. For example, I write reports and emails on my laptop, so I rarely use pen and paper anymore.

建议: Give a single clear sentence with correct tense and a brief supporting detail. Remove hesitations like "Sorry." Use linking words to show time or reason.

示例: I learned to type when I was seven, in the second grade, because my school introduced a computer class that taught basic typing skills.

建议: Make the explanation clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a topic sentence about how you practice, then add a specific example and a linking word to explain frequency or context.

示例: I improve my typing by chatting and texting friends regularly. For instance, while playing online car races I often type messages, which helps me practice speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's more easier and nowadays I can carry a portable keyboard to everywhere so I can type and it's easy for the reader because my handwriting is not good.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier, and nowadays I can carry a portable keyboard everywhere so I can type; it's easier for the reader because my handwriting is not good.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already the comparative form of 'easy'; adding 'more' is redundant. Use 'easier' alone. 'To everywhere' is incorrect preposition use; 'everywhere' does not need 'to'. Also split long run-on sentence with punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use 'easier' and remove 'to' before 'everywhere', and break into shorter clauses.

× Yes I do. I type my work in laptop every day instead of using my handwriting.

✓ Yes, I do. I type my work on my laptop every day instead of writing by hand.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'laptop' (preposition error) and include the possessive 'my' for clarity. 'Using my handwriting' is unnatural; say 'writing by hand'. Also add commas for natural speech pacing.

× And nowadays I usually not carry a pen so it had to write with my hand.

✓ And nowadays I usually don't carry a pen, so I have to write with my hand.

The sentence has incorrect negative word order: 'usually not carry' should be 'usually don't carry'. 'Had to' is past tense and mismatches 'nowadays'; use 'have to'. Also add a comma before 'so' and use 'write by hand' or 'write with my hand' consistently; 'write by hand' is preferred.

× I learn to type when I was 7.

✓ I learned to type when I was 7.

The action happened in the past, so the simple past tense 'learned' is required, not the present 'learn'. Use 'learned' (or 'learnt') with the past time reference 'when I was 7'.

× Sorry. 2nd grade in my elementary school there was a computer subject that taught me to write.

✓ Sorry. In second grade at my elementary school, there was a computer class that taught me to type.

Word order and word choice need adjustment. Use 'In second grade at my elementary school' for correct prepositional phrases. 'Computer subject' is better expressed as 'computer class'. 'Taught me to write' is ambiguous; since context is typing, use 'taught me to type'.

× I have been improved by typing by chat and text my friends when I play car online game.

✓ I have improved my typing by chatting and texting my friends when I play car racing games online.

'Have been improved' is passive and incorrect here; use active present perfect 'I have improved'. Use gerunds for activities: 'chatting' and 'texting'. 'Play car online game' is ungrammatical; use 'play car racing games online' or 'play online car-racing games'. Also ensure plural 'games' if you play multiple times.