打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and natural: state your preference clearly, avoid awkward phrasing, use correct grammar, and give a specific reason with one supporting detail. Keep it to one or two sentences and use linking words if adding support.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me think more clearly and be more creative. For example, when I take notes by hand I remember ideas better and develop them more fully.

建议: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a concise specific reason. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague words like 'supportable'. One or two sentences is enough.

示例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient, so I can work from different places. Because the keyboard and battery are built-in, it’s an easy way to finish tasks on the go.

建议: Give a clear time reference and avoid fillers. State the exact age or school year, then add one brief detail about how you learned. Keep it to one or two sentences with correct grammar.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 13 or 14 years old in eighth grade. I learned in a computer class where we practiced touch-typing exercises on desktop computers.

建议: Be specific and concise: explain the methods you use, give precise durations, and avoid filler words. Use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'also') and correct word choice ('practice' instead of 'serve'). Keep to two sentences maximum.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing for 10–15 minutes every day and doing longer sessions of 30–60 minutes a few times a week. For example, I use online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I would prefer a handwriting because it helps people to make a creative man and also it promote a thinking ability in our peoples.

✓ I would prefer handwriting because it helps people become more creative and also promotes thinking ability in our people.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before uncountable noun 'handwriting'; awkward phrase 'make a creative man' and plural 'peoples' incorrect; verb form 'promote' needs third-person singular 'promotes'. Suggestions: remove 'a' before 'handwriting'; use 'become more creative' or 'develop creativity'; use 'people' (not 'peoples') and ensure subject-verb agreement by using 'promotes'. Grammar problem type's ID:22

× I often use a laptop in every day because it's supportable and also it's some convenient for anyone in any place, so it's also provides you a easy way to do task.

✓ I often use a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for anyone anywhere, so it also provides an easy way to do tasks.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'in every day' should be 'every day' (adverb); 'supportable' is wrong word — use 'portable'; 'some convenient' incorrect modifier — use 'convenient'; 'in any place' should be 'anywhere'; 'it's also provides' has extra auxiliary and wrong agreement — use 'it also provides'; 'a easy' article-noun agreement — use 'an easy'; 'do task' should be plural 'do tasks'. Suggestions: use 'every day' for frequency, choose correct adjectives ('portable'), and fix article use and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type's ID:11

× Yes, it is it. I was a child when I learned about it how to type. I think I remember that I was in a grade eight class and it was round about 13 to 14 year old when I also get the code.

✓ Yes. I was a child when I learned how to type. I think I was in eighth grade and I was about 13 or 14 years old when I learned it.

Errors: redundant 'it is it'; incorrect word order 'learned about it how to type' should be 'learned how to type'; 'grade eight class' better as 'eighth grade'; 'round about' should be 'about' and '13 to 14 year old' must be '13 or 14 years old'; 'get the code' is unclear — likely 'learned it'. Suggestions: remove redundancy, use correct question-word order for 'learned how to', use ordinal for grade, and correct age expression and tense consistency. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× I often, uh, use, uh, different ways to improve my writing, specially, uh, I try to serve, uh, half an hour, an hour within a week, uh, and a daily basis I try to give, uh, 10 to 15 minutes. So these kinds of things help me to improve my.

✓ I often use different ways to improve my typing. Specifically, I try to spend half an hour to an hour a week, and on a daily basis I try to spend 10 to 15 minutes. These kinds of practice help me improve.

Errors: 'specially' should be 'specifically'; 'serve' wrong verb — use 'spend'; 'within a week' awkward — use 'a week'; 'a daily basis I try to give' should be 'on a daily basis I try to spend'; missing object after 'improve my' — specify 'typing' or 'skills'; 'help me to improve my' incomplete. Also subject-verb agreement with 'practice' could be 'practices help' or 'practice helps' — here 'These kinds of practice help' acceptable. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('spend'), complete the object ('typing'), and ensure clear time expressions and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type's ID:6