打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct grammar errors, avoid redundancy, and use clear linking words. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then contrast with the other option using a linking word (e.g., "however" or "but"). Keep answers to no more than five sentences and use accurate verb forms and articles.

示例: I prefer handwriting for learning because writing by hand helps me remember information better. However, when I am working or preparing long documents, I choose typing because it is faster and more comfortable. For instance, essays and reports are easier to edit on a computer.

建议: Make sentences grammatically correct and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., which device you use), then give specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example." Use correct plural forms and remove duplicate words.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I am a university student with many essays and projects to submit. For example, a laptop is convenient for editing documents and carrying them to lectures.

建议: Fix tense and pronoun errors, and remove irrelevant text. Start with a direct time reference (e.g., "When I was ten"). Explain context briefly and add a coherent detail about bilingual typing using linking phrases such as "also" or "in addition."

示例: I learned to type when I was ten in a computer class at school. The teacher showed us proper finger placement, and because our lessons included two languages, I also learned to switch between keyboard layouts while typing.

建议: Correct word choice errors and be more specific about methods. Use a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I improve my typing by practicing daily") and add concrete details or examples of practice techniques with linking words like "for example" or "such as."

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I write essays and work on university projects to build speed and accuracy, and I also use online typing exercises and timed drills to measure my progress.

× It's it depend on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The sentence uses an incorrect verb form 'depend' with an extra 'it'. In present simple for he/she/it the verb requires an -s ending: 'depends'. Also remove the extra 'it' which is redundant. Suggestion: use 'It depends on the situation.'

× For example, I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

✓ For example, I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep the adverb 'better' correctly modifying 'remember'. (Included because instruction 2 requires only listed types; sentence is valid.)

× But when I working or writing long documents it should typing because it's quicker and more comfortable.

✓ But when I am working or writing long documents I prefer typing because it's quicker and more comfortable.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous: 'I am working'. Also 'should typing' is incorrect modal/verb form. Use 'prefer typing' to express preference, or 'I should type' for obligation. Here preference fits context. Ensure subject and verb agreement and correct verb forms.

× Yes, I usually use my laptop to type because I'm a university student and I have many essay and projects to submit.

✓ Yes, I usually use my laptop to type because I'm a university student and I have many essays and projects to submit.

Count nouns 'essay' and 'project' need plural forms when preceded by 'many'. Change 'essay' to 'essays' and 'projects' is correct. Present tense use is fine; issue was pluralization (also relates to type 1), but primary correction fits present context.

× Typing on a laptop is convenient for for editing document and carrying them through lectures.

✓ Typing on a laptop is convenient for editing documents and carrying them to lectures.

Duplicate 'for for' remove one. 'Editing document' needs plural 'documents' to match general meaning. Use preposition 'to lectures' instead of 'through lectures' to express carrying items to attend lectures. Also 'carrying them' refers to documents; keep plural agreement.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when it was 10 years old as Chloe had a computer class and the teacher show us how to use the keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 10 years old because Chloe had a computer class and the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard.

Incorrect subject 'it' should be 'I'. Use 'when I was 10 years old'. 'As' can be used but 'because' is clearer here. 'Show' should be past tense 'showed' to match 'learned' and 'had'. Maintain past tense consistency.

× Delete all includes 2 languages so I learned it to swift between them while typing.

✓ The keyboard layout included two languages, so I learned to switch between them while typing.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase: 'included two languages' correctly describes the layout. Use 'learned to switch' (infinitive 'to switch') not 'learned it to swift'. 'Swift' is adjective; correct verb is 'switch'. Maintain logical sequence and clarity.

× I improve my typing by packing every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

'Packing' is incorrect word choice; the intended verb is 'practicing'. Use 'practicing' (verb + -ing) after 'by'. Ensure correct gerund form and vocabulary.

× For example, I write many essays and work on projects for university which help me build speed and accuracy over time.

✓ For example, I write many essays and work on projects for university, which help me build speed and accuracy over time.

Sentence is grammatically correct but needs a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which help...'. Present tense 'write' and 'work' agree with the ongoing habit. Added punctuation for clarity.