打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more grammatical, concise, and clearly linked to the reason. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid repetition and correct tense and article errors.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing, especially when I study languages. For example, because I am learning Chinese, I need to practice writing characters by hand, and doing so helps me remember their shapes and stroke order more effectively.

建议: Give a direct answer naming the device you use, then provide one or two clear reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use 'I type on a desktop' or 'I use my phone') and avoid conflicting statements.

示例: I usually type on my desktop computer every day, because I find the full keyboard more comfortable for long messages. However, I also use my phone for quick emails and texts since it is more convenient when I am away from my desk.

建议: Start with a concise time reference, then add one or two specific details about the process of learning and improvement using linking words. Fix tense and phrasing for clarity.

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. At first I typed very slowly because I didn't know the correct finger positions, but after years of practice I can now type quickly and accurately.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence about your main method, then give specific examples of practice routines or tools. Use correct grammar and concise phrasing, and include a linking phrase to show cause and effect.

示例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. For example, I do timed typing exercises online for 15 minutes and copy short paragraphs to focus on accuracy; as a result, my speed and precision have gradually improved.

× I do prefer handwriting when I am studying English but now because I just learning I'm Chinese so I have to practice my handwriting to write Chinese character.

✓ I do prefer handwriting when I am studying English, but now because I am just learning and I am Chinese, I have to practice my handwriting to write Chinese characters.

Error: 'just learning' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' needed for present continuous; 'write Chinese character' should use plural 'characters'. Suggestion: Use 'I am just learning' for correct present continuous and pluralize 'characters' because you mean more than one character. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× So now I prefer handwriting than typing because handwriting make me fluent in Chinese.

✓ So now I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting makes me fluent in Chinese.

Error: 'prefer' is followed by 'to' not 'than'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'handwriting make' should be 'handwriting makes'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and ensure verb agrees with singular subject: 'makes'. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× Oh, I really type on the desktop because I usually use my phone to send an e-mail, to write a letter or to do everything.

✓ Oh, I mostly type on the desktop because I usually use my phone to send emails, write letters, or do small tasks.

Error: 'really type on the desktop' awkward; 'an e-mail' can be plural 'emails' and parallel structure needed for list items. Suggestion: Use 'mostly' for frequency, remove unnecessary 'to' before each verb for parallelism, and use plural nouns when generalizing. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Since is on my phone so I prefer typing on my keyboard every day.

✓ Since it is on my phone, I prefer typing on my phone keyboard every day.

Error: Missing subject 'it' in 'Since is on my phone'. Suggestion: Include the subject ('it') and clarify 'phone keyboard' for meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× It also makes me remembers quickly about the letters.

✓ It also helps me remember the letters more quickly.

Error: 'remembers' is incorrect because 'helps me' should be followed by the base verb 'remember' (bare infinitive), and 'quickly about the letters' is awkward. Suggestion: Use 'helps me remember' and place adverb correctly: 'more quickly' or 'quickly'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Oh, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in my primary school that time.

✓ Oh, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school.

Error: Redundant phrase 'that time' and awkward article 'my primary school'. Suggestion: Use 'in primary school' for natural past-time reference. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× It's my first time to study and to type on the keyboard.

✓ It was my first time learning to type on the keyboard.

Error: 'It's my first time to study and to type' is awkward and mixes present and past. Suggestion: Use past tense 'was' and 'learning to type' for natural expression; omit redundant 'study'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× That time I know nothing about it and I type really slow.

✓ At that time I knew nothing about it and I typed very slowly.

Error: Use past tense 'knew' and 'typed'. 'Slow' should be adverb 'slowly' when describing how you typed. Suggestion: Change verbs to past and use adverb form. Grammar problem type ID: 6},{