打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và mạch lạc bằng cách tránh tiếng lóng và tiếng ậm ừ, nói rõ ràng câu chủ đề rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ và cấu trúc chưa hoàn chỉnh; dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý. Nên giữ câu ngắn gọn (dưới 5 câu) và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "memorise" hay "study notes".

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me memorise information better. For example, when I study for exams I write notes by hand, which makes it easier to remember facts and concepts.

建议: Tránh nói lắp và câu rối; trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất và mục đích sử dụng. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Thay các cụm mơ hồ bằng từ cụ thể như "assignments," "essays" hoặc "lecture notes."

示例: Yes, I use a laptop every day. As a final-year college student I mainly use it to write assignments and take lecture notes, especially for modules on ethics and personal development.

建议: Trả lời cần rõ ràng về thời điểm và rút gọn câu; tránh lặp và cụm từ không hoàn chỉnh. Nếu không nhớ chính xác, hãy nêu khoảng thời gian và một chi tiết cụ thể liên quan (ví dụ: khóa học tin học, lớp học). Dùng liên từ như "when" hoặc "during" để tạo mạch văn.

示例: I can't remember the exact year, but I learned to type during secondary school when I took a basic computer course. In that class we practised typing skills for exams and assignments.

建议: Nói rõ phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (ví dụ: thực hành qua phần mềm gõ, luyện tốc độ, bài tập chính tả), dùng thì và dạng động từ chính xác, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I usually typing". Sử dụng liên từ để giải thích quá trình và kết quả.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly, using online typing programs to increase speed and accuracy. I also type essays and study notes daily, which helps me become more familiar with the keyboard.

× Personally, I prefer handwriting rather than typing because when I write I feel on my uh, memory is umm, better.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting to typing because when I write, my memory feels better.

The sentence uses an awkward comparison phrase and incorrect word order. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A rather than B' for general preferences; place the subject 'my memory' before the verb 'feels' and remove filler words. Suggestion: 'I prefer handwriting to typing because when I write, my memory is better.'

× So I usually uh, write when uh, learn by heart or learn liter.

✓ So I usually write when I need to learn something by heart or learn literature.

Missing subject 'I' before the verbs and incorrect noun 'liter'. Use full clause 'when I need to learn something by heart' and correct noun 'literature' if intended. Ensure present tense subject-verb structure: 'I write when I learn...' or better 'when I need to learn...'.

× Yes, actually, uh, currently I umm, am a final years uh, college student, so I usually use umm laptop to umm, write my uh, umm, subjects to umm, knowledge and moral, something like that.

✓ Yes, actually, I am currently a final-year college student, so I usually use a laptop to write about my subjects, such as knowledge and morals.

Errors: plural 'final years' should be singular adjective 'final-year'; missing article 'a' before 'laptop'; awkward phrase 'write my subjects to knowledge and moral' corrected to 'write about my subjects, such as knowledge and morals.' Maintain present simple tense. Suggest using clearer nouns and articles.

× Uh, to be honest, I don't clearly remember, but at that time, uh, when I start, when I am studying secondary school, so I learned uh, many things about uh, computers to, umm, uh, test in my school, so I, umm, exposure to.

✓ To be honest, I don't clearly remember, but at that time, when I started studying at secondary school, I learned many things about computers for tests at my school, so I was exposed to them.

Tense inconsistency: 'start' and 'am studying' should be past 'started' and 'studying'; use past 'learned' and passive 'was exposed to' for exposure. Add preposition 'at' for 'studying at secondary school' and object 'them' for 'computers.'

× Personally, I usually typing many times to umm, familiar to computers and uh, typing every umm, things in the computer like uh, essays, literature or umm yeah, something like that.

✓ Personally, I usually type many times to become familiar with computers, and I type various things on the computer like essays and literature.

Incorrect verb form 'typing' should be base form 'type' after adverb 'usually'; use infinitive phrase 'to become familiar' not 'to familiar'; preposition 'with' after 'familiar' and 'on the computer' not 'in the computer.' Use plural 'things' correctly and remove unnecessary fillers.