旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 「by the window」を使い、「use it by window」は避けてください。また、「Sinale」はおそらく “scenery” または “the landscape”、「list my head」は “rest my head” の誤りだと思われます。理由を述べる際は “because” や “and” などの linking words を使い、文を区切ってください。最後の文が未完成なので、短くてもよいので明確に終えることが重要です。

示例: Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy watching the scenery go by, and it feels more comfortable and private. I can also take photos of the view and rest my head against the window if I get tired.

建议: 最初に “Yes, I did.” と直接答え、その後に具体例を続けてください。“a harvest” は文脈上 “quite a few” または “several”、“load trips” は “road trips”、“school horries” は “school holidays” が自然です。また、過去の習慣には “used to take”、過去の記憶には “still remember” を使い分けましょう。最後の “Sometimes” で文が途切れているため、5文以内で完全な文にまとめてください。

示例: Yes, I did. We used to take long road trips during the school holidays when I was a child. I still remember one memorable journey to Yokohama City because we visited several interesting places along the way. These trips were a great way for my family to bond and explore new places together.

× Yes, I definitely prefer to use it by window when I travel.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I travel.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'window' because you are referring to a specific window. Also, 'sit by the window' is the natural expression for this question. Try learning common verb-preposition combinations such as 'sit by the window' and 'stand near the door'.

× I love watching the Sinale go by and it feels more comfortable and private plus I can take photos or videos of the view and it's nice to list my head against the window if I want to take a nice

✓ I love watching the scenery go by, and sitting by the window feels more comfortable and private. Plus, I can take photos or videos of the view, and it is nice to lean my head against the window if I want to take a nap.

The original sentence is too long and ends incompletely after 'take a nice.' It contains several independent ideas that should be separated with a full stop or connected with appropriate conjunctions. The natural expressions are 'watch the scenery go by,' 'lean my head against the window,' and 'take a nap.' Try dividing long spoken answers into shorter, complete sentences.

× Here's I did a harvest and long journeys with my family when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a few long journeys with my family when I was a child.

'Here's I did' does not form a grammatical sentence or appropriately answer the question. Use 'Yes, I did have' to give an emphatic positive answer. Also, 'a few long journeys' is the appropriate noun phrase for several journeys. Practice beginning answers with clear patterns such as 'Yes, I did...' or 'No, I did not...'.

× For example, we used to take long load trips during school horries and I still remembered my mallabout and journey to Yannasa City.

✓ For example, we used to take long road trips during school holidays, and I still remember my memorable journey to Yannasa City.

Use the present tense 'remember' because you still remember the journey now. 'Remembered' is past tense and suggests that you no longer remember it. The phrase 'used to take' correctly describes a repeated past activity. When describing a past event that remains true in the present, use a past tense for the event and a present tense for the continuing feeling or memory.

× Sometimes

✓ Sometimes, we stopped at interesting places along the way.

'Sometimes' is an adverb, not a complete sentence, so it needs a subject and a verb. The correction adds 'we stopped' to make a complete clause. Avoid ending an answer with an isolated time adverb; follow it with a complete idea, such as 'Sometimes, we stopped...' or 'Sometimes, we visited...'.