旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答抓住了“喜欢坐窗边”这一核心，但存在较多语法和表达问题。应使用“sit by the window”，而不是“see by the window”；“feel sickness”应改为“feel sick”或“get carsick”；“when the car is driver”应改为“when the car is moving”。建议先直接回答偏好，再用 because 说明原因，并补充一个具体结果。注意控制句子结构，避免重复和不清楚的表达。

示例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I sometimes get carsick. Looking outside helps me feel more comfortable, especially on long car journeys.

建议: 回答基本回应了问题，并提到了童年时和家人去中国旅行，但语法错误较明显。“I'm not remember”应改为“I don't remember”；“very clear”应改为“very clearly”或“very well”；“I remember traveled”应改为“I remember travelling”。建议补充一两个具体细节，例如旅行目的地、交通方式或当时的感受，这样答案会更完整、更自然。

示例: Yes, I remember taking a long trip to China with my family when I was a child. We travelled by plane, and the journey felt very exciting because it was my first time visiting such a different place.

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when traveling because I will feel sickness on when the car is driver so I 6 by the window will feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I feel sick when the car is driven, so I feel more comfortable by the window.

这里是在说明通常的偏好和感受，应使用一般现在时“feel”，而不是将来时“will feel”。另外，“sit”比“see”更符合“坐在窗边”的语境。

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when traveling because I will feel sickness on when the car is driver so I 6 by the window will feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I feel sick when the car is driven, so I feel more comfortable by the window.

“feel sickness on when”中的介词使用错误。“when”已经可以引导时间状语从句，不需要再加“on”。表达身体不适时，应说“feel sick”，例如：“I feel sick when I travel by car.”

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when traveling because I will feel sickness on when the car is driver so I 6 by the window will feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I feel sick when the car is driven, so I feel more comfortable by the window.

“the car is driver”使用了错误的动词形式。被动结构“be + 过去分词”应为“is driven”，意思是“汽车被驾驶”。“driver”是名词，不能放在这里作过去分词。

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when traveling because I will feel sickness on when the car is driver so I 6 by the window will feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I feel sick when the car is driven, so I feel more comfortable by the window.

“sickness”是名词，而这里需要用形容词描述人的状态，因此应改为“sick”。“feel sick”表示“感到恶心或不舒服”。

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when traveling because I will feel sickness on when the car is driver so I 6 by the window will feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I feel sick when the car is driven, so I feel more comfortable by the window.

原句同时使用“because”和“so”连接同一个因果关系，句子结构不自然。可以保留“because”说明原因，再用逗号和“so”连接结果，但要确保结构清晰；也可以只使用其中一个连词。

× Yes, but I'm not remember it very clear. I remember traveled to China when I was a child with my family.

✓ Yes, but I don’t remember it very clearly. I remember traveling to China with my family when I was a child.

“remember”是实义动词，构成一般现在时否定句时需要使用助动词“do”，所以“I'm not remember”应改为“I don’t remember”。这里谈论的是现在的记忆情况，因此使用一般现在时。

× Yes, but I'm not remember it very clear. I remember traveled to China when I was a child with my family.

✓ Yes, but I don’t remember it very clearly. I remember traveling to China with my family when I was a child.

“remember”后面表示“记得做过某事”时，通常接动名词“remember doing something”，所以“remember traveled”应改为“remember traveling”。

× Yes, but I'm not remember it very clear. I remember traveled to China when I was a child with my family.

✓ Yes, but I don’t remember it very clearly. I remember traveling to China with my family when I was a child.

“clear”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词“remember”。这里需要使用副词“clearly”，所以应说“remember it very clearly”，意思是“清楚地记得这件事”。