旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答应更直接并控制句子长度，同时避免重复和语法错误。建议先给出明确的主题句（I prefer not to sit by the window），然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意用连词（because / and / so）连接句子，并用更自然的表达替换“makes my mind clean”和“broaden my sight”。例如可说“refreshes my mind”或“gives me a wider view”。

示例: I don’t usually sit by the window when I travel. I prefer to be near the aisle because I like stretching my legs and moving around. However, I enjoy looking at natural scenery because it refreshes my mind and gives me a broader view of the place.

建议: 回答要完整并展开细节。避免重复（例如“I remember I remember”），并补充具体信息：什么时候去、旅行持续多久、最难忘的经历或感受。使用连词（for example, because, and）使句子更连贯。控制在最多五句内。

示例: Yes, I did. For example, when I was ten my parents and I took a long trip to Japan that lasted two weeks. I remember visiting temples and trying new foods, which was exciting and a bit challenging because I didn’t speak the language. That trip left me with many fond memories of exploring different cities together.

× No I don't I prefer to be close to nature because it makes my mind it makes my mind clean and it can broaden it it can broaden my sight.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer to be close to nature because it clears my mind and can broaden my outlook.

问题类型为动名词或动词形式的问题（Verb + -ing form）。原句中“it makes my mind clean”用法不自然且重复“it makes my mind”和“it can broaden it it can broaden my sight”有重复与表达不当。应使用常见搭配“clear my mind”（清除/使头脑清醒）而不是“make my mind clean”，且将“broaden my sight”改为更地道的“broaden my outlook”或“broaden my horizons”。此外需要加标点并去掉重复短语。建议：记住常用搭配（如 clear my mind / broaden my horizons/outlook），避免逐字翻译并删除重复。

× Yes, I did. I also remember I remember my Japan my journey to Japan with my parents I can

✓ Yes, I did. I also remember my journey to Japan with my parents.

问题类型为过去时态问题（Past tense issue）。原句中有重复“I also remember I remember”且出现未完成的句子结尾“I can”，导致句子不完整。面试问题是过去经历，应使用过去时或现在完成表示记忆（此处用一般现在时的 remember 也可，但句子结构必须完整）。建议删除重复部分并移除不完整的“I can”，或继续补充完整的内容（例如“I can still remember it vividly.”）。此外注意标点以分隔句子。