旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答自然但有语法与表达不够地道的问题。可以把句子更简洁、地道地表述，并在必要时补充原因或具体细节以丰富内容。例如说明喜欢窗边的原因（看风景、避免晕车等）。注意不要多于五句，使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. It helps me relax, and I also find it easier to sleep with something to lean on.

建议: 回答直接且内容清楚，但可以更自然、具体地表达原因并加一两个细节来丰富答案。例如说明大人忙碌的具体工作或举一个例子，或提到是否有其他短途旅行或特殊回忆。使用连接词（because, so, however）使逻辑更顺畅。

示例: No, I rarely went on long trips with my parents when I was a child because they both worked long hours. Instead, we sometimes took short weekend outings to nearby parks, which I still remember fondly.

× Yes, I like to sit by the window in the traveling.

✓ Yes, I like to sit by the window when travelling.

句子中使用了不正确的冠词和介词搭配。原句的“in the traveling”是不自然且不符合英语习惯的表达。通常谈论“旅行时坐在窗边”应使用时间状语从句“when travelling”或“when I travel”。建议使用“when travelling”或“when I travel”。同时保留“the window”为特指机窗/车窗的正确用法。

× No, I didn't have a long journey with my parents because they are very busy and work hard.

✓ No, I didn't have a long journey with my parents because they were very busy and worked hard.

句子主句使用了过去时（didn't have），表示谈论过去的情况；但原因从句使用现在时（are, work），时态不一致。应把表示过去的背景信息也用过去时，即把“are”改为“were”，“work”改为“worked”。这样时态一致，符合英语时态搭配规则。