旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và rõ ràng trong câu trả lời. Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp (ví dụ: “Yes, I prefer to sit by the window.”), sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và chi tiết ngắn gọn (ví dụ: bạn quan sát cảnh vật, thư giãn, chụp ảnh). Dùng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, and) để nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra sửa phát âm/ lựa chọn từ phù hợp (ví dụ use “train/plane/car” thay vì “chip”). Giữ không quá 3-4 câu và ngữ pháp ở thì phù hợp.

示例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, I often watch mountains, rivers, or cityscapes pass by, which helps me relax. Also, sitting by the window lets me take photos and feel less bored during long trips.

建议: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp thì quá khứ và cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng ở thì quá khứ (ví dụ: “Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child.”), rồi nêu chi tiết cụ thể (đi đâu, khi nào, cảm xúc). Dùng liên từ (for example, because, and) để nối câu và tránh câu rời rạc. Tránh lỗi từ vựng như “talk along rush trip” — có thể là “took long trips” hoặc “went on trips”. Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng, tối đa 3-4 câu.

示例: Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, we usually went to the beach every summer and the trip took several hours by car. I remember singing songs and playing games during the drive, which made the long journey fun.

× These are so rudely I look looking at those outside. It makes the chip much more relaxing.

✓ I feel so relaxed when I look out of the window. It makes the trip much more enjoyable.

Several mistakes: wrong word order and choice ('These are so rudely' is ungrammatical; should express feeling as 'I feel so relaxed'); incorrect verb form and repetition ('look looking' should be simple present 'look'); wrong demonstrative pronoun ('those outside' should be 'out of the window' or 'outside'); incorrect noun 'chip' should be 'trip'; adjective choice 'more relaxing' can be 'more enjoyable' or 'much more relaxing' depending on nuance. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure (I + feel), use correct verb tense (simple present for habitual preference), use correct preposition 'out of' or 'by the window', and choose correct nouns ('trip').

× Yes I do my family used to talk along rush trip to the beach every summer it was away a lot of.

✓ Yes. My family used to take long trips to the beach every summer; we went away a lot.

Problems: mixing present 'do' with past habit 'used to' (choose past habit 'used to' alone); 'talk along rush trip' is incorrect word choice and order — should be 'take long trips'; missing punctuation and run-on sentence ('it was away a lot of' is ungrammatical and unclear). Suggestion: for past habitual actions use 'used to' + base verb (used to take), use correct collocations ('take a trip' or 'take trips', 'long trips'), and split into two clauses or use a semicolon for clarity.