旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えは意味が通じますが、文法ミス（時制、動詞の形、前置詞）や不自然な表現があります。また、第一文は簡潔にし、理由や具体例を一つ加えると効果的です。接続表現（e.g. because, so, which）を使って文のつながりを明確にしましょう。発音やリズムも意識して、1〜2文で要点を述べ、最大で3〜4文に留めてください。

示例: Yes, I often look out of the train window because I grew up watching the countryside pass by. When I watch the scenery, I imagine travelling abroad or inventing little fantasy stories about the places I see. This helps me relax during long journeys.

建议: 表現は明確で理由も述べられていますが、いくつかの語順や前置詞の自然さを改善できます。例えば“feel sick”は正しいですが、接続詞を使って理由を自然につなげ、具体的な状況（長距離、車酔いしやすい等）を一文で添えると説得力が増します。文は2〜3文にまとめ、冗長を避けてください。

示例: I rarely take photos from a car window because I often get car sick when I try to hold my phone and shoot. Instead, I prefer to simply enjoy the view as it passes, especially on long drives.

建议: 理由が述べられており個人的な背景も加えられている点は良いですが、語彙の繰り返し（mountains/mountain）や語法（play the outskirts）に改善の余地があります。より自然なフレーズ（play in the foothills / play near the mountains）や具体例（hiking, fresh air）を一つ加えると印象が良くなります。接続語（so, because, which）で文を滑らかに繋ぎましょう。

示例: I prefer the mountains because I grew up in the countryside and often played in the foothills near my home. The fresh air and quiet trails make me feel nostalgic and relaxed, so I usually go hiking when I visit.

× 'Yes, I would like to looking at the scenery flowing past behind the train since I was a child.'

✓ 'Yes, I have liked looking at the scenery flowing past outside the train since I was a child.'

'The original sentence uses "would like to looking", which is incorrect because "would like to" must be followed by the base form of the verb (would like to look). Additionally, the time reference "since I was a child" requires present perfect tense to indicate an action or preference continuing from the past to the present, so "have liked" is appropriate. "Behind the train" is not natural for scenery seen from a train; "outside the train" or "past the train window" is clearer. Suggestion: use "have liked looking" or "have enjoyed looking" and replace "behind the train" with "outside the train".'

× 'When I do so, I can imagine many things such as traveling abroad or stories like fantasy.'

✓ 'When I do so, I can imagine many things, such as traveling abroad or fantasy stories.'

'The sentence mostly works but needs word order and word choice improvements. "Stories like fantasy" is awkward; the correct noun order is "fantasy stories." Also adding a comma after "many things" improves readability. No major tense change is needed because "can imagine" correctly describes a present ability.'

× 'I rarely take photos of the scenery outside of the car window because if I do so I feel sick.'

✓ 'I rarely take photos of the scenery outside the car window because if I do I feel sick.'

'"Outside of the car window" is wordy; native use is "outside the car window." The phrase "if I do so" is grammatical but overly formal; "if I do" is more natural here. No article change is strictly required for "scenery", which is uncountable, so keep no article.'

× 'I only enjoy watching the scenery passing by.'

✓ 'I only enjoy watching the scenery pass by.'

'After "watch", use the bare infinitive (watch someone/something do) or a present participle; both "watch something do" and "watch something doing" can be used, but "watch the scenery pass by" is more natural than "watching the scenery passing by." Use: "I enjoy watching the scenery pass by."'

× 'I used to play the outskirts of the mountains.'

✓ 'I used to play on the outskirts of the mountains.'

'"Play the outskirts" is incorrect because "outskirts" refers to surrounding areas and requires a preposition such as "on" or "in" (play on the outskirts). The plural "outskirts" is correct; the issue is missing preposition. Suggest: "play on the outskirts of the mountains."'

× 'Going to the mountain makes me feel nostalgic and relaxed.'

✓ 'Going to the mountains makes me feel nostalgic and relaxed.'

'If the speaker refers generally to mountain areas, use the plural "mountains." If referring to a specific mountain, use "the mountain." The rest of the sentence is fine. Most natural here is plural given earlier mention of "the mountains."'}]}