建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn; tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ sai (ví dụ: "then" → "only", "skycropper" → "skyscrapers"). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết liên quan (ví dụ: số lượng tòa nhà, cảm nhận cá nhân). Dùng liên từ đơn giản để mạch văn rõ ràng.

示例: No, there are only two tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. Because there are few high-rises or apartment blocks, the area feels quiet and not crowded.

建议: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu đúng (ví dụ: chủ ngữ + động từ), tránh lặp từ; trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do hoặc đưa ví dụ. Dùng từ vựng chính xác như "I love taking photos" và phân biệt "buildings" và "nature".

示例: Yes, I love taking photos, especially of interesting buildings and natural landscapes. For example, I often photograph old temples when I travel because I like their details and colors.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề, sau đó mô tả cụ thể lý do muốn tới thăm (ví dụ: kiến trúc, tầm nhìn từ trên cao). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "I always visit to" → "I would like to visit" hoặc "I have visited"). Tránh lặp từ như "because it's because".

示例: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it is very tall and has impressive architecture. I want to go to the observation deck to enjoy the city view and take photos.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ là có hay không, sửa ngữ pháp thì quá khứ/hiện tại ("When I was a kid I used to watch") và từ vựng ("lie" → "live"). Giải thích lý do hợp lý (ví dụ: vì sợ/không thích, hoặc muốn trải nghiệm tiện nghi). Tránh mô tả lộn xộn về phim mà không nêu ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng.

示例: I wouldn't want to live in a very tall building. When I was a child I watched many movies set in tall towers and they scared me, so I prefer living in a low-rise house that feels safer and more familiar.

× No, there are then two buildings near my home because I live a small town.

✓ No, there are not many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town.

The student used 'then' instead of 'not many' and omitted articles/prepositions. 'There are' requires plural noun; use 'tall buildings'. 'a small town' needs the preposition 'in'. Suggestion: say 'No, there are not many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town.'

× There are usually don't apartment or skycropper so I feel ****** and don't crowded.

✓ There usually aren't apartments or skyscrapers, so I don't feel crowded.

Incorrect negation 'usually don't' and wrong nouns/forms: 'apartment' should be plural 'apartments', 'skycropper' is misspelled 'skyscrapers'. Also 'feel ****** and don't crowded' should be 'don't feel crowded'. Suggestion: use 'There usually aren't apartments or skyscrapers, so I don't feel crowded.'

× Love take a photo especially I really love take a photo buildings or natural.

✓ I love taking photos, especially of buildings or natural scenes.

The verb 'love' should be followed by gerund 'taking' when expressing a general preference. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos'. 'Of' is needed before the object. Suggestion: use 'I love taking photos, especially of buildings or natural scenes.'

× To be honest, I always visit to Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it's because it's so beautiful and really building, tall building and skyscraper.

✓ To be honest, I always visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it's very beautiful and a really tall building and skyscraper.

'Visit to' is incorrect; use 'visit' without 'to'. Repetition 'because it's because it's' should be fixed. Use article 'a' before 'really tall building'. 'Really' modifies adjective. Suggestion: 'To be honest, I always visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it's very beautiful and a really tall building and skyscraper.'

× When I was a kids I always watch movie about two building like horror movie or active movie.

✓ When I was a kid I always watched movies about two buildings, like horror movies or action movies.

Tense mismatch: 'was' is past so main verb should be past 'watched'. 'a kids' should be 'a kid' (singular). 'movie' should be plural 'movies'. 'two building' should be 'two buildings'. 'active movie' should be 'action movies'. Suggestion: 'When I was a kid I always watched movies about two buildings, like horror movies or action movies.'

× So I always want to lie in a tall building.

✓ So I always wanted to live in a tall building.

'Want' should match past narrative 'When I was a kid' so use 'wanted'. 'Lie' (to recline) is wrong for 'live' (to reside). Suggestion: 'So I always wanted to live in a tall building.'