建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。トピック文で直接答えた後、1〜2文で具体的な補足を入れるとよいです。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理を明確にし、不要な繰り返しを避けてください。発音や語順（there are／there is, plural／singular）にも注意しましょう。例：’No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most houses and buildings around here are low-rise, which gives the area a pleasant, open feel.’

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most houses here are low-rise, which creates a pleasant, open landscape. For example, the neighborhood has small shops and two-storey houses rather than skyscrapers.

建议: 答えは肯定で始め、その後に頻度や理由、具体例を一文ずつで述べると明瞭になります。繰り返しや語順のミスを避け、接続詞（especially, because, when）を正しく使って理由や例を示しましょう。語彙は’architecture, facades, scenes’など関連語を使うと表現が豊かになります。例：’Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially in Seville, because I like the historic architecture.’

示例: Yes, I do. I often photograph buildings, especially in Seville, because I love the city’s historic architecture. For example, I enjoy capturing colourful facades and ornate details on old churches.

建议: 意図は伝わりますが、時制や語順、意味の明確化が必要です。まず行きたい理由を簡潔に述べ、次に具体的な行動や例を続けます。不要な繰り返し（and and）や不自然な表現（take a photo on after I draw a paper）を避け、'view from the top', 'photograph the skyline'など自然なフレーズを使いましょう。例：’Yes — I’d like to visit a tall tower to enjoy the view and take photos.’

示例: Yes, there is. I would like to visit a tall tower because I enjoy panoramic views of the city. I often climb lookout points to photograph the skyline and sketch the scene afterwards.

建议: 理由の表現が不明瞭で論理が切れています。まず直接にYes/Noで答え、次に明確な理由を1〜2文で述べましょう。例えば“noise, motion, or feeling isolated”など具体的な理由を挙げ、接続詞（because, so）でつなぎます。語法（a tall building / tall buildings, when I travel）と語彙（stress, motion sickness, isolation）を正しく使う練習をしてください。例：’No, I wouldn’t — tall buildings make me feel uneasy and isolated.’

示例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. I often feel uneasy in high-rise flats and worry about noise or feeling isolated, especially when I travel or stay away from home.

× No, there are not high buildings near my house.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my house.

The adjective 'high' is not the typical collocation for buildings; native speakers use 'tall'. Also 'there are not' is grammatically correct but less natural than 'there are no'. Use 'tall' and 'there are no' for naturalness and correctness. Suggestion: Replace 'high' with 'tall' and use 'there are no' for negation of plural nouns.

× My how there is a low houses and buildings near my house.

✓ Actually, there are low houses and other buildings near my house.

The original sentence has word order and agreement issues ('My how' is incorrect, 'there is' with plural 'houses' is wrong). Use 'actually' or 'in fact' to start, 'there are' for plural, and 'other buildings' to be clear. Suggestion: Use correct introductory adverb and match verb number to plural nouns.

× It is but make good landscape.

✓ They make a nice landscape.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun and awkward structure. Use plural subject 'They' to refer to houses and buildings, and natural collocation 'make a nice landscape'. Suggestion: Use natural subject pronoun and collocations.

× Yes, I do. Often I I take a photo of buildings, especially in Seville, I think a photo of many buildings and it's very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I do. I often take photos of buildings, especially in Seville; I think many of the buildings are very beautiful.

Repeating 'I' is an error; 'take a photo of buildings' should be plural 'take photos of buildings' for habitual action. The clause 'I think a photo of many buildings and it's very beautiful' is ungrammatical; instead say 'many of the buildings are very beautiful'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words, use plural for habitual actions, and rephrase to express opinion about buildings.

× Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit because I like high towers views.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit because I like views from high towers.

The phrase 'high towers views' is ungrammatical word order; use 'views from high towers'. 'There is a building that I would like to visit' is acceptable but can be tightened. Suggestion: Reorder noun phrases for clarity and use 'views from' to show source of the view.

× I often go there and and take a photo on after I draw a paper.

✓ I often go there and take photos after I sketch them on paper.

Double 'and' is a typo. 'Take a photo on after I draw a paper' is confusing; likely meant to say they sketch (draw) the building on paper and then take photos, or vice versa. I changed to a clear sequence: 'take photos after I sketch them'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate conjunctions, clarify sequence of actions, and use verbs that match the intended actions (sketch, take photos).

× I don't think so. I don't want to live in a tall big buildings because when I'm traveled and I slept, when I when we give our disease it is stress.

✓ I don't think so. I don't want to live in a tall, big building because when I travel or sleep, or if we get sick, it would be stressful.

'Live in a tall big buildings' mixes singular/plural and adjective order; use singular 'building' and correct adjective order 'tall, big' (though 'tall, big building' is unusual; 'big, tall building' better). Also verb forms: 'I'm traveled and I slept' is incorrect; use 'when I travel or sleep'. 'When we give our disease' is ungrammatical; likely 'if we get sick'. Use 'it would be stressful' to indicate result. Suggestion: Match noun number with articles, use correct verb forms for present/future contexts, and replace unclear phrases with 'if we get sick'.