建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear and accurate: start with a direct answer, correct basic grammar (plural/singular, articles), and avoid unclear words. Keep under five sentences and add one specific detail. Use linking words for coherence.

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in an apartment building that has only four floors, so the skyline is quite low. Because most buildings here are two to four storeys, the area feels quiet and residential.

建议: Answer directly, fix verb forms and word order, and give one clear reason with a linking word. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

示例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings. I prefer photographing people, such as my friends and myself, because candid portraits capture memories better for me. For example, at parties I often take group photos.

建议: Give a direct answer, name the building clearly, and add a brief reason and one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct phrasing for locations.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit Sky Silvia, which is located near Shibuya Station. I’ve heard it has an impressive observation deck, so I want to go there to enjoy the city views and take photographs.

建议: Answer directly, correct sentence fragments, and give a specific reason with an example. Keep to a maximum of five sentences and link ideas clearly.

示例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I could enjoy high views of the city. For instance, waking up to a panoramic skyline would be relaxing and offer a nice place to have breakfast on a balcony.

× No they are not toll building near my house.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my house.

The original mixes negation and word order incorrectly. Use 'there are' for existence and plural 'buildings' for more than one; 'toll' is a misspelling of 'tall'. Add a comma after 'No'. Suggestion: learn 'there is/there are' structures and plural forms.

× I am living apartment so the apartment has four floors.

✓ I live in an apartment, and the apartment has four floors.

Use the simple present 'I live' for a permanent residence instead of continuous 'I am living'. Also include the preposition 'in' after 'live' and add a conjunction 'and' for clarity.

× And the party is the same pro.

✓ The parts are the same, too.

Original is unclear and contains wrong words ('party', 'pro'). Likely meaning is 'the parts are the same' or 'the layout is the same'. Use 'parts' and 'too' for addition. Ensure word choice matches intended meaning.

× No I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

Missing comma after interjection 'No'. While not strictly a modal issue, punctuation improves clarity. Keep negative reply 'No, I don't.'

× I prefer take photo of people such as my friends and myself, so I don't take picture of building.

✓ I prefer taking photos of people, such as my friends and myself, so I don't take pictures of buildings.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'taking'. Use plural 'photos' and 'pictures' to match general habit. Add commas for clarity and plural 'buildings'.

× I'm enjoying taking a photo with my friend.

✓ I enjoy taking photos with my friends.

For habitual actions, simple present 'I enjoy' is better than 'I'm enjoying'. Use plural 'photos' and 'friends' unless referring to one friend; keep consistent number. Present participle 'taking' is fine after 'enjoy'.

× Yes, of course I would like to go Sky Silvia Sky is located in Shibuya station.

✓ Yes, of course. I would like to go to Sky Silvia. Sky Silvia is located at Shibuya Station.

Need 'to' before place, and sentence separation. Use 'located at' and capitalize 'Station'. Break into two sentences for clarity.

× So I want to go there.

✓ So I want to go there.

This sentence is acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses 'go there'.

× Yes, of course I want to live in a tall building because I can watch the high views and. Get the.

✓ Yes, of course I want to live in a tall building because I can enjoy the views from high up.

Original has fragmented sentences and awkward phrasing 'watch the high views'. Combine into one clear sentence: 'enjoy the views from high up'. Remove sentence fragment 'Get the.' Ensure modal 'want to' followed by base verb 'live' is correct.