建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó dùng từ liên kết để giải thích (ví dụ: however, but). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi số nhiều/ít (building/buildings). Thêm cụ thể về khoảng cách hoặc ví dụ để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. However, when I go to the city centre I can see many skyscrapers. Near my house there are only low-rise houses and small apartment blocks.

建议: Cần câu trả lời ngắn gọn, chính xác và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (picture a building → pictures of buildings; person → people). Dùng linking words để mở rộng lý do (for example, because). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào bạn chụp ảnh để tăng tính chi tiết.

示例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing people. For example, I like to capture family moments or portraits rather than architectural shots.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và sửa ngữ pháp (based → located; go there up to the tallest floors and seats → go to the top floors to see the view). Thêm chi tiết như tên tòa nhà hoặc mô tả lý do thích (ví dụ: view, architecture) và dùng từ nối để mạch lạc.

示例: I would like to visit Landmark 81, the tallest skyscraper in Ho Chi Minh City. I want to go up to the observation deck to enjoy the panoramic view of the city and to see its modern architecture up close.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (a tall buildings → a tall building; over heighted → too high; something small and like comfortable → something small and comfortable). Dùng linking words (because, so) và cho lý do cụ thể như ồn ào, an toàn, hoặc tiện nghi để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: I prefer living in a house because tall buildings feel too high and impersonal to me. For example, houses are quieter and more comfortable, so I can relax more easily.

× No, there aren't big, but when I go to the central of the city I will see many tall building or skyscraper out there.

✓ No, there aren't any big buildings nearby, but when I go to the center of the city I see many tall buildings or skyscrapers there.

The sentence used singular nouns where plurals were needed (building, skyscraper) and omitted 'any' after 'aren't'. Use plural forms for general counts and 'any' with negatives. Also 'central of the city' should be 'center of the city' and 'will see' changed to 'see' for habitual/regular action.

× But near my house there are little tall houses near my home.

✓ But near my house there are a few small tall houses.

'Little' was incorrectly used instead of 'a few' or 'few' for countable nouns; 'houses' is plural which is correct but word order and choice ('little tall') are wrong. Use 'a few small tall houses' or better 'a few small houses' depending on meaning.

× No I don't because I feel like it's not necessary for me to take picture a building and it's not make any sense if I take photos of them.

✓ No, I don't because I feel like it's not necessary for me to take pictures of buildings and it doesn't make any sense if I take photos of them.

'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' or 'take a picture of a building'. Also after 'it' the verb needs third-person singular form 'doesn't make' not 'don't' or 'not make'. Use 'of' with 'pictures of buildings'.

× I feel like I prefer to take photos of person either than buildings.

✓ I feel like I prefer to take photos of people rather than buildings.

Use the plural 'people' for persons in general and the correct comparative phrase 'rather than' (not 'either than'). Also use 'of people' for photos of persons.

× I would like to visit the skyscraper, the tallest building in Vietnam. It is based in Ho Chi Minh City and I would like to go there up to the tallest floors and seats, the view of the city.

✓ I would like to visit the skyscraper, the tallest building in Vietnam. It is located in Ho Chi Minh City and I would like to go up to the top floors and sit there to enjoy the view of the city.

'Based in' is wrong for buildings; use 'located in'. 'Go there up to the tallest floors and seats' is ungrammatical; use 'go up to the top floors and sit there' with the present participle 'sitting' if continuous. Also 'the tallest floors' is odd; 'top floors' is natural.

× Now I prefer living in the houses because when I live in a tall buildings I feel like it's kinda over heighted for me and I prefer something small and like comfortable for me than something is big.

✓ Now I prefer living in houses because when I live in tall buildings I feel like they are kind of too high for me and I prefer something small and comfortable rather than something big.

'A tall buildings' mixes singular and plural; use 'tall buildings'. 'It's kinda over heighted' is ungrammatical; use 'they are kind of too high' or 'too tall'. 'Prefer something small and like comfortable' should be 'prefer something small and comfortable' and comparative phrase 'rather than' required instead of 'than something is big'.