建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Habla con oraciones más naturales y corrige la gramática: usa contracciones y estructura sujeto-verbo correctamente. Añade una oración de apoyo clara con una razón específica y un conector para coherencia. Por ejemplo, reemplaza “No near to my home” por “No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home” y añade “because” o “so” para explicar.

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because my neighborhood mostly has small houses and local shops. As a result, the area feels more quiet and community-oriented.

建议: Organiza la respuesta con una oración principal y detalles específicos usando conectores como “especially” o “for example”. Corrige errores gramaticales (there are, near my university, which is). Sé conciso y evita repetir palabras.

示例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit the city center because there are many tall and interesting structures. For example, there is a very tall building near my university which has an amazing glass facade that I like to photograph with my phone.

建议: Evita muletillas como “umm” y corrige vocabulario: usa “the Vatican” y preposiciones correctas (“history of it” o “a lot of history”). Añade una razón concreta y una frase adicional con un detalle histórico o arquitectónico para enriquecer la respuesta.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit the Vatican because I admire its Renaissance architecture and religious art. I’m especially interested in seeing St. Peter’s Basilica and the Sistine Chapel, which are famous for their history and stunning frescoes.

建议: Corrige la estructura y el vocabulario: usar “I don’t feel it’s safe” o “I don’t feel safe there”. Evita repeticiones y muletillas, y añade una razón concreta con un ejemplo (ruido, escape routes, neighbors). Mantén respuesta breve y coherente.

示例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I don’t feel it’s safe, especially during emergencies. I prefer a house or a low-rise flat since they usually feel more secure and quieter, and it’s easier to leave quickly if needed.

× No near to my home.

✓ No, not near my home.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'; use 'near' alone or 'near my home'. Also add 'not' for negation and a comma after 'No' for natural speech rhythm. Suggestion: say 'No, not near my home.' or 'No, there are no tall buildings near my home.'

× They are no tall buildings because my neighborhood is a place with a small house and local stores.

✓ There are no tall buildings because my neighborhood has small houses and local stores.

Use 'There are' to state existence and 'no' after the verb: 'There are no tall buildings.' 'My neighborhood is a place with a small house' is awkward and singular; use plural 'small houses' or rephrase to 'has small houses'. Also 'has' is the correct verb for possession. Suggestion: 'There are no tall buildings because my neighborhood has small houses and local stores.'

× Yes, if I go to the center of my city where they are a lot of tall buildings and I take photos with my phone.

✓ Yes. If I go to the center of my city, where there are a lot of tall buildings, I take photos with my phone.

The phrase 'they are a lot of tall buildings' uses wrong word order and pronoun. Use 'there are' to indicate existence. Add commas to set the relative clause. Suggestion: 'If I go to the center of my city, where there are a lot of tall buildings, I take photos with my phone.'

× Especially on one of one building near to my university who is very tall and has an amazing.

✓ Especially one building near my university that is very tall and amazing.

'Near to' should be 'near' and 'one of one building' is incorrect; likely 'one building' is intended. Use 'that' for buildings (not 'who'). The adjective 'amazing' needs a noun or can stand alone as predicate: 'that is amazing.' Suggestion: 'Especially one building near my university that is very tall and amazing.'

× Yes, umm, I would like to visit the Vaticano because I really like this kind of infrastructure and I think that that place has a lot of interesting history on it.

✓ Yes, um, I would like to visit the Vatican because I really like that kind of architecture and I think the place has a lot of interesting history.

Use the English name 'the Vatican'. 'This kind of infrastructure' is unnatural; 'that kind of architecture' fits better. Avoid repeating 'that that'. 'Has a lot of interesting history on it' is unidiomatic; say 'has a lot of interesting history.' Suggestion: 'I would like to visit the Vatican because I like that kind of architecture and I think the place has a lot of interesting history.'

× No, because I don't feel it like a safety place.

✓ No, because I don't feel it is a safe place.

Use 'feel it is' or better 'find it' and 'safe' (adjective) not 'safety' (noun). The phrase 'like a safe place' is possible but 'feel it is a safe place' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I don't feel it is a safe place.'

× In my case I prefer to living in a house or in a flat because I don't feel comfortable, uh, comfortable table living in a small building.

✓ In my case, I prefer living in a house or a flat because I don't feel comfortable living in a small building.

After 'prefer' use the gerund 'living' (or 'to live'). Remove the duplicated 'comfortable' and the stray word 'table'. Keep 'a house or a flat' parallel. Suggestion: 'I prefer living in a house or a flat because I don't feel comfortable living in a small building.'